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Review(s): 4
| Reviewer: Birgit | Date: 2003-10-12 |
| Reviewid: 56347 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great story! I wondered what it was about in the beginning, but at the end everything is clear: Neville needs to save many lives. Neville is in character: uncertain, but very determined after he made his decision. I loved reading this! |
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| Reviewer: Tapestry | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50673 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like the premise of this story, it's an original concept and you write a very good Neville. There are a lot of really strong descriptions in this and good dialogue as well. I was confused by the crup, I kept expecting something more about him. If you decide to expand this story, you might consider removing the crup or tying him back into the story later so that he doesn't feel like a loose thread that was never addressed. I'm very interested to know what was killing the forest, I hope you continue the story and thanks for sharing it! |
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| Reviewer: Demonangi | Date: 2003-09-01 |
| Reviewid: 49926 | Chapter: 1 |
Aww ... That was really good. I like the idea of haveing the entire thing from Nevilles prespective. He was such a major character in OotP! you're a really talented writer.
~Angi :o) |
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