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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2003-10-06 |
| Reviewid: 55677 | Chapter: 1 |
Interesting alternative for how James received his cloak, and sparkling dialogue.
Catherine |
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| Reviewer: Shalimar Foxfire | Date: 2003-09-05 |
| Reviewid: 50822 | Chapter: 1 |
Hehe, very funny! I had wondered how they had gotten the Cloak, and now I've got this bit of information in me head! "Ssh..." Sirius interrupted, "do not question such gifts." and "Oh what fun we'll have."
An excellent bit of writing! |
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| Reviewer: Corgi | Date: 2003-09-03 |
| Reviewid: 50586 | Chapter: 1 |
| :applause: Very Siriusy! And an interesting origin for the Cloak. I appreciate people remembering that Peter WAS their friend then, and this: “I have never seen anybody run that fast” (heehee) |
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| Reviewer: Darwin's Apprentice | Date: 2003-09-03 |
| Reviewid: 50432 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nice Marauders tale. Their characterizations are done well. I like the way they have a fine disregard for the rules even early on like this. Well done. |
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| Reviewer: Teresa | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49669 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a creative way for such an important article of clothing in canon to appear! You have some really good lines in here; the note about Sirius's laundry stands out in particular. Well Done :) |
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