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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: To Open My Eyes
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: BirgitDate: 2003-10-26
Reviewid: 57929Chapter: 1
A beautiful story. I like the way you write Ginny as first person. And the friendship with the centaur is nice. You've written the centaur himself very well.
I think it's a bit unbelievable that Harry is waiting in the Forest, but I guess the word-limit prevented you from explaining that.

Reviewer: TapestryDate: 2003-09-03
Reviewid: 50447Chapter: 1
This was a great story, you have a way of conveying emotion that comes across very well. There were also a lot of very good descriptions. I especially liked the line "We grow up a lot faster here than I think we're meant to, especially with Voldemort back, reminding us of things we'd rather forget." It seems to have a particular resonance for the HP series that rings especially true. I hope you'll share more of your stories with us in the future. Good job!

Reviewer: Darwin's ApprenticeDate: 2003-09-03
Reviewid: 50430Chapter: 1
Sweet. I like the "beat yourself over the head" teenage angst. It just seems to bubble out of her. And Briar seems to know the only cure. I enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Talking Purple RabbitsDate: 2003-09-02
Reviewid: 50341Chapter: 1
::grins::

squeeeeeeeeee!

(awwwwww!)

that was adorable! yes! thank you! just the fluff I needed!

ta,
~TPR

Reviewer: beDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49957Chapter: 1
A very sweet and lovely written story. :)

Reviewer: CaseyDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49653Chapter: 1
Really good story. You write very well! Write more stories!!

Reviewer: JackDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49609Chapter: 1
Vespie, this story made me smile. And I like Briar. He's... old. He kinda reminds me of Dumbledore.

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