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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2003-09-12 |
| Reviewid: 52035 | Chapter: 1 |
| I guessed right away who (or what?) was Aragog's pet, but thoroughly enjoyed the telling all the same! I like the details of Aragog's life you've supplied, and the implication that the car never does make it out of the forest again, but is happy there. Congratulations on your award--it's well deserved. |
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| Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione) | Date: 2003-09-10 |
| Reviewid: 51758 | Chapter: 1 |
Dear zzzFF Luminous Marble,
Wonderful. Very sweet. GREAT ending. I expected it to be a spider... but this is better. They both need friends, and the messes it made! Oil, windshield washer, Unless of course I'm totally missing the point.... Good job.
Paige |
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| Reviewer: Corgi | Date: 2003-09-03 |
| Reviewid: 50556 | Chapter: 1 |
| I guessed who the pet was when I got to 'stole the meal' line, but that didn't detract from the delight of the story. Popular critter, that Anglia! (Love the pet-care details, quite amusing) |
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| Reviewer: Chris | Date: 2003-09-01 |
| Reviewid: 50031 | Chapter: 1 |
| Excellent - I didn't see that ending coming! I love the reference to stealing a meal from his sons & daughters. |
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| Reviewer: Jenny | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49832 | Chapter: 1 |
That was sweet!
I was confused up to the last line, but it's a really cute story. Great idea. |
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| Reviewer: Giesbrecht | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49803 | Chapter: 1 |
| ::falls about laughing:: That was brilliant. You totally surprised me. Well done. |
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| Reviewer: Tapestry | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49638 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very original, I love the idea of Aragog having a pet. You've used a lot of wonderful imagery and the gradual build up to the revelation of what exactly his pet is was well done. Great job and congrats on winning! |
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