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Review(s): 9
| Reviewer: Zee Cline | Date: 2005-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 109416 | Chapter: 1 |
Queenie,
I like your style--you take on the POV of others very well. You are very talented and I think we will be seeing you in bookstores soon. I will be sure to not only send fan mail, but to attend your first book signing as well.
Zee (Antonio's mom) |
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| Reviewer: Darwin's Apprentice | Date: 2003-09-06 |
| Reviewid: 51006 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nicely done. I like Firenze's honor. Even in the face of personal loss, he knows he must do what is right. And the herd leader Cimbaith seems strong. I like that he is willing to accept that Firenze must decide what is right for himself. But Cimbaith still enforces the law for the good of the herd. A good leader. I enjoyed this! |
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| Reviewer: Ice | Date: 2003-09-02 |
| Reviewid: 50224 | Chapter: 1 |
| so very noble. great depiction of firenze and his beliefs, eventually resulting in exile. epona? from zelda?? |
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| Reviewer: Kitcat26 | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49763 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nice story, your first person prose followed wonderfully. However, if I remember correctly, didn't Hagrid interfer with the fight between Firenze in OotP (pg. 686-687 AE)? So in that respect, your story doesn't follow canon. Otherwise, though, good job. Nice insight to why Firenze did what he did. |
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| Reviewer: HeatherK | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49755 | Chapter: 1 |
| Thanks for the nod to Sags everywhere, it made me feel special! :) Great great story! I loved the wording and the nobility and just the whole darn thing. Good job. |
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| Reviewer: Ashtur | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49748 | Chapter: 1 |
I never really understood what made Firenze leave his herd. Of course he is just a nice guy as it goes, but this line says it all "If one must be broken so that all others may be free, then so be it".
Huzzah! |
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