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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 37

Reviewer: Lumos_NoxDate: 2006-07-05
Reviewid: 143960Chapter: 1
Wonderful! I love that last bit...

"What's there to worry about?"
Apparently a wet kiss from a human hosepipe under a Nargle-infested mistletoe...
I laughed so hard at that!

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-03-23
Reviewid: 141226Chapter: 1
Excellent

Reviewer: catDate: 2005-10-22
Reviewid: 134945Chapter: 1
Um, yeah...
...really funny. I liked it. I thought Remus's 'go with the flow' comment was great. *laughs like mad* no seriously, I thought it was beautifully written.

Reviewer: Elf-VulcanDate: 2005-05-31
Reviewid: 123131Chapter: 1
Lovely. You did a wonderful job. and I can easily imagine this conversation. Especially as I just finished book 5 :).
Thank you!

Reviewer: spooky foxbabeDate: 2004-12-10
Reviewid: 107461Chapter: 1
"...a best friend who happens to have longer hair and sleeps in a different dormitory."
so true, unfortunatly. this story ROX!
"send snape my greasiest regards." lol!

Reviewer: Michel ClayDate: 2004-12-07
Reviewid: 107130Chapter: 1
Great story. It's kind of sad to read this and know Sirius could never have a talk like that with Harry.
You should write another one.

Reviewer: prplhez8Date: 2004-09-30
Reviewid: 99981Chapter: 1
Adorable, and well written. It was totally in character for Remus/Sirius. They banter oh so well. Good job, keep it up!!

Reviewer: snickerdoodleDate: 2004-05-19
Reviewid: 83420Chapter: 1
I was wondering whether you'd ever consider writing in a conversation between Harry/Sirius (and perhaps Remus as well) about girls as a sort of extension to this story which is FABULOUS by the way. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: AlphieDate: 2003-12-10
Reviewid: 62767Chapter: 1
Very nice...and sweet. I like to think that Sirius and Remus had many simple conversations in the time they had together.

Reviewer: ElizabethDate: 2003-12-10
Reviewid: 62756Chapter: 1
GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT... IT WAS SO CUTE.... AWWWW SIRIUS IS SO WORRIED ABOUT HARRY AND GIRLS..... HEHE ...

Reviewer: xonyDate: 2003-11-16
Reviewid: 60317Chapter: 1
hehe, this is a *really* good story...it reminds us that there are more things in the world besides Voldy...

‘Send Snape my greasiest regards’

I specially loved that...^^

Reviewer: LeilaniDate: 2003-11-12
Reviewid: 59842Chapter: 1
you are a really good writer, please keep it up. I liked the story. Damb you are the bomb.

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-11-04
Reviewid: 58667Chapter: 1
Ha Ha! Love the last sentence! (And the rest too)

Reviewer: dragontacDate: 2003-09-27
Reviewid: 54547Chapter: 1
ha! i thought by the summary that harry would pop through and ask for girl advice, but this was just as good! lol

Reviewer: FioDate: 2003-09-18
Reviewid: 53403Chapter: 1
HAHAHAHA! last line was hilarious! very good and funny and sweet. Also sad that Sirius never got to have the conversation wi- *SOB* I can't go on!

Reviewer: EmilyDate: 2003-09-18
Reviewid: 53370Chapter: 1
Awww this was really good. It made me sad though. LOL Poor Sirius :^( Was it a short story? Or are you continuing it?

Reviewer: NigellaDate: 2003-09-18
Reviewid: 53206Chapter: 1
This is great! Any time spent with Sirius is a pleasure, especially with Remus as well - and I love the idea that Sirius can sometimes sense what Harry is thinking and feeling ... thank you!

Reviewer: EireneDate: 2003-09-18
Reviewid: 53202Chapter: 1
Absolutely hilarious =)

Reviewer: PelirrojaDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53182Chapter: 1
What a wonderful story. The dry humor is so perfect. I can just picture Remus smirking to himself over his book.

Reviewer: FernWithyDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53181Chapter: 1
How fun! I love that Sirius really wants to be a good parent, and is flailing about trying to find the right balance. But he's doing it so exuberantly! You can really feel in this how happy it makes him to be Harry's guardian, something that it's hard to see from Harry's point of view. I also love your Remus--so perfectly observant, pretty unflappable by nature but turning up the volume on the trait just to amuse himself by watching Sirius get more worked up in response to it. Good work!

Reviewer: LDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53157Chapter: 1
haha, loved your last line! That was an awesome story, great point and great missing moment!!

Reviewer: CheddarTrekDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53142Chapter: 1
Excellent fic! You portray both Sirius and Lupin remarkably well, especially Sirius' concern about being a good godfather and Lupin's reactions. Well done!

Reviewer: Incurable RomanticDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53141Chapter: 1
How charming, rather bittersweet. I really enjoyed it. Go Remus!

Reviewer: HermioneGreenDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53135Chapter: 1
Just the cutest story ever. I could just see Sirius in my head, pacing up and down in front of the fireplace, worried about how to approach the subject of girls with Harry.

Very well written

HermioneGreen

Reviewer: RobinDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53130Chapter: 1
Excellent! Lots of fun and very in character. You had me laughing out loud, and I enjoyed it a lot. I can't wait to read more stories by you.

Reviewer: dinkaDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53108Chapter: 1
this was so cute. you got lupin's and sirius's characters perfectly! :)

Reviewer: RachelDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53105Chapter: 1
Very funny, I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: beckDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53099Chapter: 1
that was cute and silly. Very nicely done.

Reviewer: MyfDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53097Chapter: 1
Oh, that was really good. What a perfect Remus. "I pick up on things." No wonder he's one of the most popular characters!

Reviewer: ElucrehDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53094Chapter: 1
Tee-hee! Very good capturing of moods, of characters, of Sirius's complex difficulties...I love Harry-father-figure theories, and I absolutely adore your portrayal of this.

Reviewer: Kit BlackDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53092Chapter: 1
Fantastic! More please!

Reviewer: JessicaDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53085Chapter: 1
That was sooo adorable! Bravo!

Reviewer: shannonDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53084Chapter: 1
i saw your name on the list of recently updated authors and thought "Why does it sound so familiar?" Then i realized that i had read your story--this one--in FictionAlley and loved it. I couldnt review there becayse im too lazy to register but right now i want to say this story always uplifts my mood when im sad about Sirius and i love it!
I like the non-angst conversations between the two in 12Gr. Im sure there was angst and that's ok, but i like the light hearted conversation too.
Anyway i just wanted to say this story rocks and please, do write more :)

Reviewer: ivy & GracieDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53073Chapter: 1
woot! a great remus/sirius moment. the kind of thing we'll all be treasuring from now on...

your dialog flows nicely, and it's very funny. two thumbs up!

Reviewer: Madame LupinDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53065Chapter: 1
Awww! That was a really sweet and funny story. It's just that...that...Sirius never got to have that...talk...with Harry :*(

Reviewer: HannahDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53063Chapter: 1
That was excellent! Remus was perfect! Sirius was brilliant!
'Send Snape my greasiest regarts.' Priceless!
'After all, narrowly escaping Voldemort four times, what's a gisl and a kiss, er?'
'Precisely. Piece of cake. Walk in the park.' Classic!
'... a wet kiss from a human hosepipe under Nargle-infested mistletoe...' LOL!
I couldn't help but feel sad when Remus said '... you'll be able to think fast on your feet come the time.' If only there had been a time... *sign* Poor Sirius...

Reviewer: SreyaDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53062Chapter: 1
*laughing*
*launghing some more*
*cracking up*

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