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Review(s): 19
| Reviewer: Sam | Date: 2004-10-06 |
| Reviewid: 100577 | Chapter: 6 |
| YOU MEANIE:-P A CLIFFHANGER:-P! I can't wait till the next installment. I hope it is VERY soon! This is a great story:-D! Keep up the good work! |
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| Reviewer: Mincot | Date: 2004-07-05 |
| Reviewid: 90817 | Chapter: 5 |
Excellent work--another lovely chapter! Tonks' and Remus' different reactions to Molly's mothering were both well-drawn. And Minerva's dry observation was priceless; I can imagine that all of the other women in the kitchen really did feel that they were back at school! I especially have liked your use of Kubler-Ross's stages of grieving. Too many fanfic writers stay safely with the sense of loss, without remembering that there can be a strong sense of anger, as well, at the loved one who "left". And that anger can be such a conflicted emotion!
Excellent work... |
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| Reviewer: Rachel | Date: 2003-12-09 |
| Reviewid: 62609 | Chapter: 2 |
| This story is really well done - you capture Remus' voice, which is no easy task. I love the line in the first chapter: 'Diversionary tactics immediately required: I am fooling no one.' Please continue soon! :) |
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| Reviewer: Pelirroja | Date: 2003-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 59599 | Chapter: 1 |
I send a heartfelt, "thank you" to all who have reviewed for the kind words. It means a lot that someone else enjoys my writing besides me.
I have received two emails asking ( aside from Alphie's good-natured teasing )if I am shipping Remus and Tonks; the answer is--no, I am not shipping them. In fact, I swear with right hand placed on my well worn copy of POA, and my left hand raised with my Ravenclaw wrist watch that I do not intend to make them an item. |
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| Reviewer: Alphie | Date: 2003-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 59587 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really do like this - despite my teasing about the Remus/Tonks moments. THEY ARE FRIENDS! Can't wait to see where you take this. |
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| Reviewer: Alkari | Date: 2003-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 59543 | Chapter: 2 |
I love Remus when he gets coldy angry! So nicely 'reasonable'.
Good lead-in for what I am sure will an interesting discussion and a growing friendship between Remus and Tonks. |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-11-09 |
| Reviewid: 59450 | Chapter: 2 |
| WOW! I'm reviewing chpaters 1 and 2. And both are amazing! I hope you update soon. :) |
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| Reviewer: R | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53333 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story was pretty cool. I like the way it came to be that MAd Eye,Tonks,Remus and such were there at the platform. Hopefully things will get better for Harry but from what I have understood from JKR it is only going to beocme more difficult in future books for Harry. |
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| Reviewer: Kat | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53324 | Chapter: 1 |
| Love the story. Lupin is fast becoming one of my favourite characters and I love the way you've written him. Mad Eye as Moses ;oD and Molly thinking that the *shirts* were out of place is just soooo Molly. Love it! |
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| Reviewer: FernWithy | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53303 | Chapter: 1 |
Good job with Remus's feelings, and I'm glad it was his idea to go to the station--I also like that he hung back with Harry, because he knew where he was needed.
And I stopped reading to laugh at, "Right now you look like a combination Moses and D’Artagnan." :p |
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| Reviewer: Yolanda | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53291 | Chapter: 1 |
| I enjoyed this very much. You gave Remus a strong resolve that he must have to tap into just to survive being who he is. I liked all of the other characters, particularly the discussion between Tonks and Moody. |
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| Reviewer: Doc | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53274 | Chapter: 1 |
Woohoo! Congrats on getting the first chapter posted at SQ, P!!
I've never seen this scene written from Remus' perspective... very intersting. I think you handled Remus' thoughts and feelings very well.
Looking forward to chapter 2!
~Dr. Monaco~ |
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| Reviewer: R1&R2 | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53255 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nicely written from Remus' POV. But wouldn't they have met the train in the late afternoon rather than at 10:00 a.m.? The train leaves FOR Hogwarts at 11 and gets there right before the dinner feast. Other than that, it's fine. |
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| Reviewer: Alezandria | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53247 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wonderful, wonderful! I think you've captured brilliantly all that's going on in Remus's head. Also, love the quote up top there :p Bravo! |
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| Reviewer: Alphie | Date: 2003-09-18 |
| Reviewid: 53239 | Chapter: 1 |
| BRAVO!! I know how much it means to you to have this posted. It's really a nice fic. I think this is the first time we've seen this moment from Remus' perspective. Very nice indeed. |
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