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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Thick Woollen Socks
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: Emma W.Date: 2005-03-06
Reviewid: 115658Chapter: 1
Excellent story. However, the formatting is atrocious, I don't know what went wrong. I had to copy it and paste it onto a new folder in my computer so I could read it. Don't worry, I deleted it :D.

Reviewer: Newbia the ElfDate: 2003-10-18
Reviewid: 56953Chapter: 1
When I finally managed to read it, it was very good. I'm glad you could make something so moving out of a simple joke about socks. Other then that, though, it's not really written amazingly well.

Reviewer: Lady NorbertDate: 2003-10-18
Reviewid: 56934Chapter: 1
Wow...I don't know what went wrong here, but the formatting in this story desperately needs to be repaired. I can't even read it.

Reviewer: R1&R2Date: 2003-10-17
Reviewid: 56846Chapter: 1
Please fix the format and re-post.

Reviewer: CatherineDate: 2003-10-17
Reviewid: 56813Chapter: 1
I really wanted to read this story, but it is not written in it's usual way. Please change it.

Reviewer: jameyzDate: 2003-10-17
Reviewid: 56759Chapter: 1
It was really hard to read the story, but I really liked it. It also would have been better if you had broken up the piece into paragraphs. But besides that, I liked how you interpreted Dumbledore's desire of socks. Since Albus is that old, he must have had a family but at his current age, he must have had great-grand children and the time span of Albus's decendants don't really match up. Well, that's pretty much all.

Reviewer: Jill W.Date: 2003-10-17
Reviewid: 56757Chapter: 1
Hate to complain, but this format is completely illegible.

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