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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Emma W. | Date: 2005-03-06 |
| Reviewid: 115658 | Chapter: 1 |
| Excellent story. However, the formatting is atrocious, I don't know what went wrong. I had to copy it and paste it onto a new folder in my computer so I could read it. Don't worry, I deleted it :D. |
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| Reviewer: Newbia the Elf | Date: 2003-10-18 |
| Reviewid: 56953 | Chapter: 1 |
| When I finally managed to read it, it was very good. I'm glad you could make something so moving out of a simple joke about socks. Other then that, though, it's not really written amazingly well. |
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| Reviewer: Lady Norbert | Date: 2003-10-18 |
| Reviewid: 56934 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow...I don't know what went wrong here, but the formatting in this story desperately needs to be repaired. I can't even read it. |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2003-10-17 |
| Reviewid: 56813 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really wanted to read this story, but it is not written in it's usual way. Please change it. |
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| Reviewer: jameyz | Date: 2003-10-17 |
| Reviewid: 56759 | Chapter: 1 |
| It was really hard to read the story, but I really liked it. It also would have been better if you had broken up the piece into paragraphs. But besides that, I liked how you interpreted Dumbledore's desire of socks. Since Albus is that old, he must have had a family but at his current age, he must have had great-grand children and the time span of Albus's decendants don't really match up. Well, that's pretty much all. |
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