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Review(s): 27
| Reviewer: Tash | Date: 2005-02-23 |
| Reviewid: 114725 | Chapter: 1 |
Wild guess at the book..."Hogwarts: A History" or maybe...just maybe "Flying with the Cannons"?
Great story. |
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| Reviewer: CornedBee | Date: 2004-05-19 |
| Reviewid: 83504 | Chapter: 1 |
| Brilliant. Completely contrasts with my own characterization of Hermione's parents, but this story is very cool. |
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| Reviewer: megamick50 | Date: 2003-10-23 |
| Reviewid: 57507 | Chapter: 1 |
That was.. well.. Very good. I smiled, exhaled, and then smiled again. It's one of those stories that just kinda makes you smile softly, you know?
I really liked it. :) |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2003-10-22 |
| Reviewid: 57452 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great job! I really like the ending. The suppressed mirth of Ellen at her Mother-in-law (as Ellen "agrees" with her about what is best for Hermione) is perfect. And I like the way you make Hermione take after both of her parents. Very cute! |
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| Reviewer: shellebelle | Date: 2003-10-22 |
| Reviewid: 57447 | Chapter: 1 |
| BWAHAHAHA! I was ready to smack Gran for most of the story, but the end was perfect. Poor, deluded woman. A great story! Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: catakit | Date: 2003-10-22 |
| Reviewid: 57396 | Chapter: 1 |
| Fabulous, absolutly spiffy. I would ask for more, but I'm afraid if you work at it to hard you would crush the fresh spirit of it, so please, write again when the muse strikes. |
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| Reviewer: Katie Bell | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57375 | Chapter: 1 |
THAT WAS AWESOME!
Olivia Granger sounds like a Dursley! I would hate being normal. Thank Merlin I was born weird!
The best part is........."Hermione was perfectly normal. "
GREAT STORY! Keep it up!
~~Katie Bell |
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| Reviewer: Rachael | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57365 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ah yes,perfectly normal. ; )is there going to be more? It seems to be an abrupt ending. |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57344 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love Olivia Granger! I like her opinionated meddling in her son’s family which shows, in a rather old fashioned way, how much she cares about Hermione. You’ve written a truly enjoyable tale which made me smile. |
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| Reviewer: Kate Lynn | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57319 | Chapter: 1 |
Lol...a great ficlet. I loved the character of Hermione's grandmother. She felt like a real grandmother, and had clear Granger qualities. The interactions between her and Hermione and Harry were humorous and touching. Overall, I loved it. Thanks! 8-)
Kate Lynn |
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| Reviewer: Samiam77 | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57292 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is fantastic! Great idea to tell it from a completley different perspective :) |
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| Reviewer: canis lupus | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57290 | Chapter: 1 |
| nice. :) very...found Olivia rather annoying at first, but then...this woman seems to be nice to annoy...will she ever find out Hermione's a witch? :) |
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| Reviewer: Myf | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57278 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, that was great! What a Muggley grandmother for poor ickle Hermione! (Shh - don't tell, but she reminds me of my own grandmother too!)
Heh - no wonder Hermione's best friends with two boys, having blue bedroom walls at home!
Thanks! |
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| Reviewer: Hannah | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57277 | Chapter: 1 |
| I smiled. It's very nice to imagin Hermione relating very personally to Harry from the start. Priceless! |
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| Reviewer: Rachel | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57240 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was quite cute. I loved how she couldn't quite read the title- it didn't even occur to me that wizards might do that. I adore the idea of Hermione growing up in a blue room without dolls... The double-meaning of "wouldn't reach her potential" was wonderful. This was a very original POV, and it turned out quite well. |
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| Reviewer: Elucreh | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57234 | Chapter: 1 |
| An refreshingly clever look at what Hermione's backstory may be. I love the subtle irony, the combination of traits from her parents that Hermione possesses, and OH the doll on the roof! |
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| Reviewer: Wendelin the Weird | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57220 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hilarious. hope you have other stories in your head; you tell them well. |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57198 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was excellent! I've never seen Hermione through her family's eyes and this was a great read! |
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| Reviewer: Cendrillon | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57160 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was wonderful! I enjoyed it very much. It's a nice story on its own but a sequel wouldn't hurt. I think it would kind of be interesting to see more of Olivia Granger. |
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| Reviewer: Insanity | Date: 2003-10-21 |
| Reviewid: 57155 | Chapter: 1 |
Yeah, rigth, perfectly normal! Poor old grandma, she has no idea! It's nice how you show different sides of Hermione in her parents.
THe only thing that was annoying it that I have read a fic before where Hermione's mother was named "Olivia", so I had to keep reminding myself that here it is her grandma! |
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