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Review(s): 20
| Reviewer: Brigantia | Date: 2004-07-02 |
| Reviewid: 90276 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like your story. It's unique, the characters are believable, and it's a nice change of pace. I hope the candy machine inspires you again. :) |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-06-30 |
| Reviewid: 89703 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a great story! Extremely well written and amazingly original. Your portrayal of the Nun and Sorcerer was fantastic, and I loved the interaction between them. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits | Date: 2003-11-11 |
| Reviewid: 59689 | Chapter: 1 |
HAHAHA!!!!
I like it very much. Perhaps it wasn't supposed to be funny, but I can just see the nuns being suspicious of chocolate.
Los Sinalmas....what a perfect name for the Dementors.
Well done! This was very cool...b/c I have never met anyone else who attempted to bring the whole Church thing into fan fciton.
awesome! Write more! (It doesn't have to be about this, just write anything!)
ta,
~TPR |
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| Reviewer: xony | Date: 2003-11-09 |
| Reviewid: 59479 | Chapter: 1 |
| oh! lovely story...(gracias a los Olmecas, Mayas, Aztecas, Chontales y otras culturas que nos dieron el chocolate) hehehe ^^ :lol:....bye.... |
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| Reviewer: Tracy | Date: 2003-11-08 |
| Reviewid: 59295 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very, very good, Mely...very imaginative. I had never thought of a nun ending up in the HP universe, or the nuns' reaction to chocolate. I am glad I was drinking chocolate coffee while I was reading it. ;) |
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| Reviewer: Pauline | Date: 2003-11-08 |
| Reviewid: 59269 | Chapter: 1 |
| You should have a health warning on this - Reading Will Induce Chocolate Craving. As well as inspiring the munchies, you've given us all an entertaining little story and a thought provoking piece on the ways that Wizarding and Muggle history could intersect. Well done! |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2003-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 59163 | Chapter: 1 |
Sweet! Ok, I'm sorry. But you asked for it. And it is a sweet story! I like this line:
>>“You are a nun,” he replied in the same tone.<<
He rebukes her without insult. Very clever. Great job!
Don |
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| Reviewer: Jill W. | Date: 2003-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 59149 | Chapter: 1 |
Sweet! Glad to know that the wizarding world had chocolate when they needed it.
I liked the wizard's reaction:
“You are a sorcerer,” she said.
“You are a nun,” he replied in the same tone.
I also liked Guadalupe being the first one to use the phrase "Devil's Food" in relation to chocolate. (Now all they need to do is bake it in a cake...)
Just one thing bothered me. I don't think sugar was common back then. I'm not sure that a nunnery would have had any. I would think they'd have had to sweeten the chocolate with honey. |
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| Reviewer: GryffinMiraur | Date: 2003-11-05 |
| Reviewid: 58914 | Chapter: 1 |
| I am impressed. That was very skillfully done. And I love the term Sinalmas. In fact, I think it's a better name for a Dementor than Dementor. They'll be Sinalmas to me from now on. |
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| Reviewer: Kate Lynn | Date: 2003-11-05 |
| Reviewid: 58824 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, I loved it! Excellently written, and very original. Just a great read. Thanks so much for it. 8-)
Kate Lynn |
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| Reviewer: Pelirroja | Date: 2003-11-05 |
| Reviewid: 58814 | Chapter: 1 |
| ¡Qué interesante! ¡Muchas ideas originales! A very unique approach to the question of chocolate. Sinalmas(without souls) is a great name for dementors. Keep writing more that was great. |
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| Reviewer: Clotho | Date: 2003-11-05 |
| Reviewid: 58813 | Chapter: 1 |
| Bravo on portyraying another culture so well, Bravo! And double bonus points, because I adore Spanish culture! |
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| Reviewer: Spartina | Date: 2003-11-05 |
| Reviewid: 58789 | Chapter: 1 |
| A delicious confection! How completely characteristic of a Spanish cloister that Sor Francesca would bless the strange food before partaking...and what a lovely surprise, that the Abbess should trust the old man and his gift. Of course we know perfectly well that chocolate can be divine and wicked at the same time... |
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| Reviewer: Faelaern | Date: 2003-11-04 |
| Reviewid: 58768 | Chapter: 1 |
This was a *brilliant* fic. You told a Harry Potter story...fits the bounds of canon perfectly...without mentioning a single canon character or wizarding place. It was quite interesting to see the wizard-nun interaction and this 'Quickly she made the sign of the cross herself. “You are a sorcerer,” she said.
“You are a nun,” he replied in the same tone.' was absolutely hillarious! Interesting to think of chocolate as being completely of wizarding orgin. |
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