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Review(s): 130
| Reviewer: kendra004 | Date: 2007-09-09 |
| Reviewid: 149200 | Chapter: 1 |
| oooo loved this one. i even got goosebumps while reading lol. very believable and so sweet too *sigh* ....if only guys were like that lol |
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| Reviewer: Lizbing | Date: 2005-06-21 |
| Reviewid: 124770 | Chapter: 3 |
They were at Madam Puddifoot’s. Ginny examined the window display. "Huh," she said absentmindedly. "It looks like a teddy bear threw up."
I can't tell you how hard that made me laugh!! Ginny to a T! |
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| Reviewer: merlyn | Date: 2005-03-29 |
| Reviewid: 118041 | Chapter: 8 |
All together now---AWWWW!
I wish cute guys would grab me and snog me on the slightest provocation. Is there a spell for that, I wonder? |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2005-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 115980 | Chapter: 8 |
| I don't see how it's a chapter. Each chapter is AWESOME by itself, but it's like they're starting from the beginning each one. But anyway, that aside, just amazing. |
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| Reviewer: nora | Date: 2005-03-04 |
| Reviewid: 115399 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great and awesome, and funny as heck, I don't know why, but this is one of the only Harry/Ginny stories I really like. Great job |
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| Reviewer: Ginny | Date: 2005-01-14 |
| Reviewid: 110844 | Chapter: 8 |
| Oh, I love your stories! Especially the last one, where he fortuanatly tripped only 'three times'. Love it, keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Lily | Date: 2004-12-14 |
| Reviewid: 107746 | Chapter: 5 |
| Hehe, good work, Basil M! Those were terribly cute. You've fulfilled my desire for Harry/Ginny goodness... for now. *giggles* Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Anesiere | Date: 2004-09-19 |
| Reviewid: 98683 | Chapter: 8 |
OMG!!!!!!!!!
I love this fic...they r all great!!!
I loved the french one :)!!!!
please write more!!!
peace n luv. |
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| Reviewer: PadfootsAngel | Date: 2004-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 95946 | Chapter: 2 |
I love ur fic its so cute and the bit where it says
He couldn’t think. Hell, he was having difficulties breathing.
that is so sweet. I`m being forced off the net right but I`ll b back 2 read more so please keep it coming ():0)- PadfootsAngel |
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| Reviewer: PadfootsAngel | Date: 2004-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 95945 | Chapter: 1 |
| Get in there my son. God harry u ain`t half know wot u want once u get started ():O) |
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| Reviewer: Kati | Date: 2004-07-09 |
| Reviewid: 91535 | Chapter: 8 |
| MUST...BE...MORE!!!!!! i LOVED that, i had so many great laffs!! great series or whatever you want 2 call them, but they are absolutly, positivly GREAT!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: amanda | Date: 2004-07-05 |
| Reviewid: 90733 | Chapter: 8 |
| omg, how cute where these stories?? I loved them soo sooo soo much!! They rock! keep writing more! |
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| Reviewer: reader | Date: 2004-07-05 |
| Reviewid: 90609 | Chapter: 8 |
| thats sooooooo sweet! i luv the chronicles!! u should do more but its k if u dont wanna...great stories! |
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| Reviewer: kelly | Date: 2004-05-30 |
| Reviewid: 85304 | Chapter: 8 |
| omg keep writing...this story is amazing...i really would like to find out wat happens with harry and ginny:)please please please please keep writing. |
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| Reviewer: St. Margarets | Date: 2004-05-23 |
| Reviewid: 84146 | Chapter: 8 |
"JKR, for creating the two most beautifully destined to snog one another characters that I have ever had the good literary fortune to stumble across."
We are as one with this sentiment! They are so perfect together, I just don't understand why this ship is so controversial. Oh, well--as a true believer I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed the Chronicles as a whole.
This was another fine story. Ron and Hermione were perfect. I really like one-shots and I really like the humor and the desire and the sparkle of first love that you bring to all your stories. I hope to see more from you. |
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| Reviewer: Esther | Date: 2004-05-18 |
| Reviewid: 83326 | Chapter: 8 |
| Your done?? NOOO!! This is the BEST seiries!!!!! :( Oh well! I awaite another story from you!!! |
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| Reviewer: L | Date: 2004-05-18 |
| Reviewid: 83252 | Chapter: 7 |
This "Polylanguage Spell" is a great idea! However... No offence to LadyG, but this isn't very good French. I guess Harry and Ginny must have used Ron's old wand, after its encounter with the Whomping Willow back in Second Year.
Although I'm only a poor Muggle, I think I can come up with a better translation...
"Peregre Bililinguis Français!"
"Harry, tu es un crétin aveugle et je ne sais pourquoi je t'aime."
"Je dis que tu es un crétin aveugle et que je ne sais pas pourquoi je t'aime."
"Est-ce que tu comprends maintenant, idiot ?"
"Je ne reçois pas d'ordres de la part de cochons de Britanniques !"
"Maintenant, tu veux que je te parle, petit ?"
"Ginny, j'ai eu très peur en te voyant tomber et je suis désolé de ne pas avoir pu t'aider. Mais quand tu es tombée, je me suis rendu compte que je tiens à toi. Enormément. J'ai eu si peur... et j'espérais qu'on pourrait, je ne sais pas... passer un peu de temps ensemble. Sans personne autour. Comme à Pré-au-Lard."
"Finite Incantatem!" (Hogsmeade was adapted in Pré-au-Lard in French, so as to keep some of the meaning)
And to think I have spent 5 years learning English and Spanish translation, whereas witches and wizards only need a well(functioning wand... Not fair! |
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| Reviewer: Talimeeka | Date: 2004-05-17 |
| Reviewid: 83074 | Chapter: 8 |
| Noooo! That's the last one!? That's awful! I mean, the story was great as usual, but that's the last one? But these are my favorite H/G stories! No more wondeful H/G fluff by Basil M.? I'm not one to beg for more, but this is an exception. Please write more! |
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| Reviewer: Dillybean | Date: 2004-05-15 |
| Reviewid: 82809 | Chapter: 1 |
I must say, these were some of the best H/G fluffy stories I have read here on the SQ! I was very sad to see them end...keep up the good work!
~Dillybean |
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| Reviewer: Fleur | Date: 2004-05-15 |
| Reviewid: 82775 | Chapter: 8 |
Excellent ending! Each story was wonderful and all I can say is that I'm sad to see this whole production come to an end.
Thanks for the good times!
Fleur |
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| Reviewer: Cendrillon | Date: 2004-05-15 |
| Reviewid: 82694 | Chapter: 8 |
I've been enjoying this series. It's fun to read these short bits of fluff and still get a nicely written story.
Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Poooooca | Date: 2004-04-07 |
| Reviewid: 77525 | Chapter: 1 |
Haha, 1 down, 2 to go!
Nasty reviewers can kiss your (and my) ...*cough*...
I luurve your story. |
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| Reviewer: anon | Date: 2004-04-07 |
| Reviewid: 77512 | Chapter: 7 |
This is why taking French rather than the translate button is a good thing.
Ginny, it etait very alarming to look at you tomb and ja am desole that Icould not help you. But as you are tomb, I realized that I love you. Much. I was if fear... and I hoped that we could, I do not know... to leave together. Without other people. Like Hogsmeade has |
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| Reviewer: Elsha | Date: 2004-04-04 |
| Reviewid: 77178 | Chapter: 7 |
| Ehh...fluff. You can never have enough good-quality H/G fluff, I say. I mean, plot is nice, but it doesn't give you the same warm fuzzy feeling as a collection of nice romantic pieces like these. Keep up the good work. |
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| Reviewer: Emily | Date: 2004-04-03 |
| Reviewid: 77089 | Chapter: 7 |
aw. that was cute. I like the french. you have some mistakes...like accents and a couple spelling errors..more like typos..
tombe et ja suis desole que je ne pourrais pas
It should be 'je' not 'ja' but, whatever... good story none the less..
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| Reviewer: Dark flier | Date: 2004-04-03 |
| Reviewid: 77055 | Chapter: 1 |
WOW!!!!!!!! GREAT job @ keeping them in character!! thank God there was more chapters
or i would've ATTACTED someone !!! |
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| Reviewer: Jack Ichijouji | Date: 2004-04-03 |
| Reviewid: 77018 | Chapter: 7 |
Ah, I follow this on ff.net. I never review, because I'm terrible, and I apologise, but I love this story. These stories. This one in particular. Your French, while not quite perfect (which is actually understandable, considering it's magic and not study) is a lot better than many attempts one sees.
I like how there almost seems to be an intangible arrangement between Harry and Ginny, almost as if they just expect the other to be around: Ginny forgetting Harry was in the hospital with her, meaning that she was used to his company, for example. The old, swimming in butterdishes Ginny wouldn't have done that. Her instruction for him to do her homework as well, the sort of thing Ron would say to Hermione.
Anyway. All in all, I like it. If ever I develop a rating system, I'll come back and give you its max. In the mean time, two stars up, or something. |
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| Reviewer: Amy | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70548 | Chapter: 6 |
| Very cute story... just wanted to let you know that there are beta notes highlighted in yellow right in the middle of the story. You might want ot fix that, as it kind of distracts the reader! |
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| Reviewer: Stormdelver | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70407 | Chapter: 1 |
| Just thought I would drop you a line of encouragement, these are very good H/G stories- light, and showing hope and promise. Keep them up- sometimes a short story can be as effective as a novel- perhaps even inspire. Very nice for raeding and sipping tea by the fireside. Of course I hope that, in the end H/G end up together- at least they will im my favorite fics. |
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| Reviewer: *LuNa* | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70403 | Chapter: 6 |
Cute little Valentine's Day story! Just as charming as the others! Good work!
*The 1 and only LuNa* |
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| Reviewer: alex | Date: 2004-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 66570 | Chapter: 5 |
another thing, i love h/g fluff and r/h fluff also- anyone who has fan fixes like that please, i'd love to be your beta reader- also, keep me posted if you have any fan fixes like that (h/g and r/h) at:
mysuperskater@yahoo.com
thanx
love u all |
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| Reviewer: alex | Date: 2004-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 66567 | Chapter: 5 |
love it- you should really write more- if you need a beta-reader i'll be glad to help out!!! my friend's writing the best fan fix- so everyone go to fanfiction.net
and then for the username type in: ronandhermione4ever1
the title is... well, i dont remember but its 18 chapters so you'll know which one it is- for those who've never gone to fanfiction.net, go to search, and then search by username, and type in ronandhermione4ever1
its awesome |
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| Reviewer: Elly | Date: 2004-01-07 |
| Reviewid: 66054 | Chapter: 5 |
AAAAAAAAH! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'm am seriously addicted! I just adore the Harry/Ginny fluffiness of it all! (I'm all for them getting together...I've known since book 1!)
Thanks for writing what you have already....JUST DO SOME MORE!!!! (please!) |
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| Reviewer: *~Jessica~* | Date: 2004-01-04 |
| Reviewid: 65714 | Chapter: 5 |
| NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob* it can't end yet i just CAN'T! i feel so-so- This is so unfair!! Keep it coming whatever you write I'll read. *speaking through sobs* You're a GENIOUS!! I'd say a mini J.K. Rowling.! |
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| Reviewer: Gurl who's almost crying with joy | Date: 2004-01-04 |
| Reviewid: 65707 | Chapter: 4 |
| Im SOOOOOOO happy for Harry and Ginny! The part where he wouldn't let her go and yanked Ginny back was CLASSIC! |
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| Reviewer: AmethystPhoenix | Date: 2004-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 65589 | Chapter: 5 |
I love this collection of ficlets! This one was especially cute, especially the renegade mistletoe. Hehe... Ron and Hermione kissed in front of everyone...
I loved the part where Ginny says 'there's plenty of room in my bed'. Very naughty... wonder what Harry was thinking of.
~AmethystPhoenix |
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| Reviewer: maggie | Date: 2004-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 65525 | Chapter: 5 |
| I couldnt believe my luck. I'm always looking for storys with ginny/harry and here I found ginny?harry chronicles wow, yay . you should add more. |
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| Reviewer: Lily | Date: 2004-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 65466 | Chapter: 5 |
| BRILLIANT!!! I absolutely love you H/G stories. They're always really really cute and sweet. Hopefully you'll write more of them soon!!! |
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| Reviewer: alyssa p | Date: 2004-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 65427 | Chapter: 5 |
| im talking about writing more this better not be your last one hopefully this review will encourage you to write more at least ten more at that im a huge harry/ginny shipper and love to read stories because they are defenitly meant to betogethr i look forward to more stories in the future signed a very harry potter fan!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: KEDme | Date: 2003-12-31 |
| Reviewid: 65271 | Chapter: 5 |
| I love this series of ficlets! They are so sweet! Congratulations on this latest. Your Harry is very true to canon... Great job with this latest!!! Just in time for Christmas, too.... |
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| Reviewer: Dillybean | Date: 2003-12-30 |
| Reviewid: 65237 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love them!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE...or I will send the penguins to steal your sanity!! And I'm sure you don't want that. :P |
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| Reviewer: rachel meltzer | Date: 2003-12-30 |
| Reviewid: 65229 | Chapter: 5 |
| wow. i love this! it's not too emotional. but i love it at the end: "Harry found himself thanking frad and george, the author of ever muggle chrismas snog he could think of, and whatever genius had come up with the mistletoe." that was very cool. |
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| Reviewer: Becky | Date: 2003-12-30 |
| Reviewid: 65198 | Chapter: 5 |
| I absolutely adored this one. All the allusions to muggle Christmas songs were hilarious, especially the one with "joyous". Joyous is a beautiful word. And I loved "Ginny-wonderfulness joy." the last paragraph was amazing. But by far my favorite part was, "Where was [mistletoe] when you needed it?" Oh, forget it I loved it all! (Even though I'm Jewish!) |
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| Reviewer: Farie | Date: 2003-12-30 |
| Reviewid: 65159 | Chapter: 5 |
| Cute! I like how they didn't kiss in front of everyone---that always bugs me....good job! |
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| Reviewer: Valerie | Date: 2003-12-29 |
| Reviewid: 65135 | Chapter: 5 |
| Aww, that was sweet. I especially liked the bit with the Christmas songs. I can just see Arthur going around humming familiar tunes with messed up lyrics; reminds me of myself when I was a much younger child :P. That was a cute little kiss! :) |
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| Reviewer: Allie | Date: 2003-12-27 |
| Reviewid: 64923 | Chapter: 4 |
| I love the interuptt. Buy you must get back to the actual story. I need to know what happens. Unless of course its finished |
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| Reviewer: Miss_Hermione_Granger | Date: 2003-12-27 |
| Reviewid: 64915 | Chapter: 4 |
kool.
I love The Harry and Ginny Chronicles, can't wait for the next part!
Luv
Miss_Hermione_Ginny |
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| Reviewer: Daniela | Date: 2003-12-27 |
| Reviewid: 64903 | Chapter: 4 |
| it was good....v. good, erm...it was short on substance, but it was still quite enjoyable to read. everybody needs some plotless fluff sometimes. and i was well over due, so thank you for that. |
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| Reviewer: Timothy T | Date: 2003-12-25 |
| Reviewid: 64813 | Chapter: 4 |
To Basil M ,for your friend Smith,
From Baron Von Krogg
A very well written short but enjoyable fic on
the First Kiss of H/G. Hopefully there will be
more on this very enjoyable topic. Happy Christmas |
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| Reviewer: rachel | Date: 2003-12-25 |
| Reviewid: 64796 | Chapter: 4 |
| wow... this is awsome!!!!! i love it how you made ron see them kissing... it was awsome!!! these stories are amazing. |
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| Reviewer: Valerie | Date: 2003-12-24 |
| Reviewid: 64737 | Chapter: 4 |
| That was sweet! I think this one is my favorite out of all the others. There is absolutely nothing sweeter than H/G fluff, not even R/Hr (although that is very sweet, too). You write H/G snogging very well. Congratulations! |
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| Reviewer: Laura Elizibeth Wilson | Date: 2003-12-24 |
| Reviewid: 64699 | Chapter: 4 |
Oooh!
I'm squeeing in joy, really.
Teehee!
So these are all standalone, and have nothing to do with one another?
Hehe, I would have liked to see more from the Hogsmeade one though. *grins*
Pure H/G fluff it is, I can't believe Ron WINKED! Lmao! |
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| Reviewer: Elly | Date: 2003-12-24 |
| Reviewid: 64632 | Chapter: 1 |
These stories are so sweet! I just wish there were more than three! PLEASE KEEP WRITING THEM! :D :D :D
I think Harry and Ginny are meant to be...:) |
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| Reviewer: ChelseaWeasley | Date: 2003-12-23 |
| Reviewid: 64611 | Chapter: 3 |
| i think i found my favorite h/g stories, not to mention my favorite author on sugarquill! all of your stories are simply awesome! |
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| Reviewer: georgia | Date: 2003-12-23 |
| Reviewid: 64502 | Chapter: 3 |
| so so SO good . mostly chapter 1! write another ,, write dozens,,,,,,,,, i'll read them ALL!!!!!!!!!!! (I.E.) i luv 'em |
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| Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits | Date: 2003-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 64260 | Chapter: 3 |
Ha! Love this!
Two Best Lines(I couldn't pick just one):
>""Who?"
>"Er, Ginny." Harry winced and closed his eyes, but opened them after a few moments when the fist he was expecting never hit him.
>Ron was still examining himself in the mirror, unsuccessfully trying to hide a grin. "
and
>"What had Hermione said about not talking about other girls while on a date? Much to his relief, Ginny did not start crying.
>Does that mean we’re not on a date? he wondered."
HAHAHA!!!!
And she wanted toast! And Harry refused pumpkin pie!!! HAHAHAHAH!!!!
:D
~TPR |
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| Reviewer: Azyne | Date: 2003-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 64239 | Chapter: 2 |
Holy crap.
I decided to skip the first chapter and move onto the second, and now I think I should have started with the first cuz this is very....whoa. Strong, let's say. And emotional. AND FLUFFY!!! Very sickeningly sweet. And though we all know this would NEVER, mind you, EVER happen in canon because Ginny is not the weak little child she was in CoS, I liked it. :) |
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| Reviewer: lily | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64165 | Chapter: 3 |
| these are so cute. i absolutely love them. please continue with them they're the best!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: firewhiskey | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64143 | Chapter: 3 |
| that was such a cute chapter! i loved how they were all nervous at first but then ended up "attacking" each other. i kind of like how they aren't even an official couple yet but keep getting pulled together by a major force of lust/love. it makes it more enticing to read. thanks for your great stories! |
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| Reviewer: Rachel Meltzer | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64141 | Chapter: 3 |
| wow... these are amazing! i love them!! i love it how you're just writing bout harry and ginny, not bout hermionie and ron... it's great! write more!! these rock!!! |
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| Reviewer: Narumi | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64122 | Chapter: 3 |
| Great!! I always look forward to reading your new posts! These bits of fluff are always just what I need to brighten my day! I hope you keep writing these for a good long time!!! (I'll just die if you don't write at least ten more 'chapters'!!) ;p |
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| Reviewer: miss vera vance | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64113 | Chapter: 3 |
| Wow. Spicy! A bit of raging hormones. It practically came right through the computer screen. Aiyayaee |
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| Reviewer: Becky | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64093 | Chapter: 3 |
| This was so joyous! Harry and Ginny in the cafe made me so happy. Their interactions were perfect. YAY! |
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| Reviewer: Delleve | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64091 | Chapter: 3 |
| Good job! I love your Ginny and Harry. You make everything flow so easily and don't get caught up in the fairy tale romances. You keep it real. |
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| Reviewer: Ruthie | Date: 2003-12-19 |
| Reviewid: 64039 | Chapter: 3 |
| You know, every once in a while you just need some sugar coated fluff. This was quite tasty! |
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| Reviewer: Valerie | Date: 2003-12-19 |
| Reviewid: 64025 | Chapter: 3 |
| "Harry was quite happy to be attacked." teehee. That was cute. I liked the angry glares coming from Micheal and Cho. I love these little stories! |
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| Reviewer: Shannon | Date: 2003-12-17 |
| Reviewid: 63648 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ahem -- wow. That was quite different than your other two storis, wasn't it? But I do have to say, for raunchy stuff, it was well written. Good of you not to just make it mindless smut. |
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| Reviewer: firewhiskey | Date: 2003-12-16 |
| Reviewid: 63632 | Chapter: 2 |
| fluffy and wonderful...i'm loving it! i love these stolen moments they keep having and i'm looking forward to more...you have more right?!?! |
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| Reviewer: line | Date: 2003-12-15 |
| Reviewid: 63457 | Chapter: 2 |
Aww... I LOVE it :D
I have read it before though ;) maybe on checkmated......
really good fic'
please write more :)
-Line |
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