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Review(s): 23
| Reviewer: Sionwitch | Date: 2005-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 135783 | Chapter: 1 |
Ok, I think I got the wroing idea, I wanted this story to be longer :(
only one chapter??? I want more, please? :P |
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| Reviewer: Sionwitch | Date: 2005-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 135782 | Chapter: 1 |
Im glad that finnaly found a fic about siruis death, I need closure :)
It seems very good, but I will tell you my full opinion when I read the rest |
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| Reviewer: Danielle | Date: 2005-03-16 |
| Reviewid: 116765 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hi, that was good, but you need to expand on it a bit more. Start a new chapter? But that was, as Ron would say " Blooby Brilliant!" lol. |
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| Reviewer: butterbeercap | Date: 2004-07-26 |
| Reviewid: 94055 | Chapter: 1 |
| I wouldn've liked to see more but that was a very powerful ending... good job! |
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| Reviewer: butterbeercap | Date: 2004-07-26 |
| Reviewid: 94054 | Chapter: 1 |
| I wouldn've liked to see more but that was a very powerful ending... good job! |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2004-03-31 |
| Reviewid: 76630 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow. That was short. And I'd like to see more connections between the dialogue to smooth things out.
You could really go in a lot of directions with this. I'd love to see you develop it more.
Catherine |
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| Reviewer: Gufa | Date: 2004-02-12 |
| Reviewid: 70351 | Chapter: 1 |
Short, but just the right length.
Poignant.
Interesting interaction, if I can call it that: Sirius watching from the other side of the veil.
Very good writing.
Gufa |
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| Reviewer: Stepps | Date: 2004-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 69205 | Chapter: 1 |
*gasp* Traumatic! Especially for a Sirius-isn't-dead-he's-trapped-in-an-Alternate-Reality believer. AKA, one in denial!
Really nice writing though!
Stepps |
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| Reviewer: I am not tellin | Date: 2004-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 69114 | Chapter: 1 |
| Geez thanks for begin back that sad memory. :( But VERY good! thats what I thoughtwould happen but no one else thought he see James that is except you! |
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| Reviewer: beck | Date: 2004-01-14 |
| Reviewid: 67073 | Chapter: 1 |
| it is a very good though and well written but i think you should elabort a little more on it but other then that Excellent |
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| Reviewer: Kari Lynn | Date: 2004-01-14 |
| Reviewid: 67002 | Chapter: 1 |
carmen *says in singsong voice* i read this on email, didn't i? *ponders* well, getting to review.... It's very good! i also hope this is you, because if not, i have made a mistake (the Chemistry class reference was enough to console me)
btw- you should put more fics on here asap, tey're just sitting, gathering dust at ff.net, they deserve a place here, submit em!
Wishing you a slow and painful death,
Love always,
Kari Lynn |
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| Reviewer: Laura Carlie Darla Carems | Date: 2004-01-13 |
| Reviewid: 66890 | Chapter: 1 |
Hey!
I'm Laura Carlie Darla Carems!
Call me 'Carlie' and sometimes 'Darla'!
Err... what should I say. |
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| Reviewer: Delleve | Date: 2004-01-13 |
| Reviewid: 66825 | Chapter: 1 |
Whoah, that was pretty good, even though kind of short. Sirius was very IC and you really expressed his emotions well.
I love the ending,
"'And I'm dead too.'"
It was just a very powerful way to end the fic and even a slightly happy way mixed with a sad undertone, if that makes any sense at all.
Hope to hear more from you in the future! |
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