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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: KirstyDate: 2004-10-24
Reviewid: 102309Chapter: 1
Wow, that was really amazing! I loved it!

Reviewer: Frankie BeeblebroxDate: 2004-07-12
Reviewid: 91995Chapter: 1
I stumbled across this on my quest for stories for the Penseive's Review Challenge, and I am so glad I did. You use some particularly haunting and poignant imagery that really brings about the mood of the piece. Great characterization of Remus,you have made his greif very real. I also thoroughly enjoyed the flashbacks that showed more of the relationship between the boys when they were growing up. Fabulous job!

Reviewer: MeredithDate: 2003-11-06
Reviewid: 59119Chapter: 1
this was good. why no more stories?

Reviewer: TapestryDate: 2003-06-24
Reviewid: 38435Chapter: 1
This was a very well written fic, full of emotion and depth. I love you description and ability to build a scene. The tie in of the weather with Remus's mood was well done. The only suggestion I would have for improving it is in the third and fourth paragraphs when you switch to second person POV from third. That is very jarring and seems unnatural. You might try reworking it as part of Remus's thoughts, still in third person, but as him imagining what might be going on behind those closed curtains, tying in to his own paranoia throughout those dark days. Overall though this was a great story, and you've done a really good job.

Reviewer: TeeDate: 2003-03-10
Reviewid: 23487Chapter: 1
Absoultly astonishing! Very chilling as the last reviewer said. Dont give up hun~

Reviewer: KSDate: 2002-12-21
Reviewid: 13558Chapter: 1
Wow...chilling

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