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Review(s): 15
| Reviewer: Chris | Date: 2004-06-30 |
| Reviewid: 89708 | Chapter: 1 |
I really enjoyed this story. The friendship between Angelina and Alicia felt really real as I was reading it and that was a great way to introduce Katie into their dynamic. I always like to read about these Gryffindor girls...they obviously have great rapport on the team and this does a good job of illustrating one possible scenario that explains the origins of it.
You have an excellent command of dialogue - it flows very naturally & you can almost hear the speaker's voice. Well done! |
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| Reviewer: Kagome | Date: 2004-03-29 |
| Reviewid: 76328 | Chapter: 1 |
This was a lovely insight into a canon not-well-known character, and a wonderful idea for a "missing moment" fic. I loved it!
I liked how you made the canon fit with this, and I loved your Angelina and Alicia. They were very beliavable :)
Definitely a good read! |
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| Reviewer: AuthorByNight | Date: 2004-02-17 |
| Reviewid: 71189 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, that was so cute! I enjoy reading fanfics about characters we don't read much about, but they aren't always so good-yours is! |
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| Reviewer: Robin | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68685 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hey, this was really cute! A suggestion for a follow-on could be one of the others' perspective of when Harry joins the team. |
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| Reviewer: Artemis | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68521 | Chapter: 1 |
"She could feel a white-hot rage wash over her and she would cheerfully have torn out his vocal cords with a boathook to prevent him ever saying such a word again."
Very descriptive...I like it.
"Miss Spinnet, this is not your Irish dancing class. Stop that immediately."
That's my most favorite part. I'm an Irish dancer myself, and I was delighted to read that.
Cheers...this was a pleasant story.
Artemis
"I’m left-handed, ma’am."
Haha...that was witty. You had me laughing! |
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| Reviewer: Linda | Date: 2004-01-26 |
| Reviewid: 68470 | Chapter: 1 |
| Loved it! My favorite line: "...under a captain like Oliver Wood, if Gryffindor didn’t win, they would almost certainly die trying." I'll bet Harry would agree with that! |
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| Reviewer: Jess | Date: 2004-01-24 |
| Reviewid: 68280 | Chapter: 1 |
| I absolutely loved your story! Great writing, and I really liked your approach on this, it was very original and creative! Keep up the good work, and remember: it's talent, not blood! |
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| Reviewer: mdelaur | Date: 2004-01-24 |
| Reviewid: 68213 | Chapter: 1 |
| oooh, I very much enjoyed your story. Interesting scene that had never occured to me before. Good job! |
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