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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: Kate Lynn | Date: 2004-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 68738 | Chapter: 1 |
Really wonderful work. The rhythm and pace was excellent, and the imagery very descriptive. It captivated me, and I think did a nice job of depicting the characters. A wonderful read, thanks so much for it. 8-)
Take care,
Kate Lynn |
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| Reviewer: Yarrow | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68642 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hi Andy, I prefer to e-mail but can't find your e-mail. So will just say I think these are wonderful. I really enjoyed reading them and felt taken out of time for a moment, caught in the rhythm of your style. Let me know if you'd like a list of fave lines - there were quite a few! Yarrow yarrowofthewood@hotmail.com |
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| Reviewer: Antoniaeast | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68598 | Chapter: 1 |
| Amazing, beautiful and very true poetry. You sum it all up so perfectly- the way people respond to the characters. By the way, It's November 1981, rather than 1980 |
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| Reviewer: CheddarTrek | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68576 | Chapter: 1 |
That was great. I am not a huge poetry fan, but I can appreciate that you did an excellent job here. I especially enjoyed the one about Dumbledore and the 3-year summer one.
Keep up the great work. |
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| Reviewer: GryffinMiraur | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68555 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'd never thought of applying poetry to Harry Potter, but this is lovely. Your way of mixing the reader with the story is very effective. I especially liked the poem about James because I agree with your sentiment. I hope you'll write more poems. |
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