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Review(s): 32
| Reviewer: Hermny | Date: 2007-10-25 |
| Reviewid: 149729 | Chapter: 1 |
Horrid. I hate it. Dont ever write again.
YOUSTINKATWRITING.
jUST KIDDING.
it was ok, but TOTALLY unrealistic, and hard to follow.
Try again |
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| Reviewer: Lord James | Date: 2005-08-04 |
| Reviewid: 128825 | Chapter: 4 |
| I really enjoyed this story, I liked how you described Ginny's feelings towards Harry. I have loked and looked but i cant find the song You're Still You, I feel like I'm missing out on a big part of the story. looking foward to reading to sequewl! |
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| Reviewer: Slugabed | Date: 2005-03-05 |
| Reviewid: 115594 | Chapter: 1 |
| It's kind of ridiculous. Harry isn't very much in character. And your dialogues are terribly choppy. |
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| Reviewer: hairy_hen | Date: 2004-10-06 |
| Reviewid: 100543 | Chapter: 3 |
| You'll pardon me, but I'm not finding this to be in character. I firmly believe that Harry must eventually open up to Ginny in the books, but he's doing it way too fast here, saying things I simply can't hear Harry saying at this point in canon. The two of them would have to have much more history of talking to each other about things before that level of trust can exist. I don't think Harry would respond well to being pushed to talk about his problems, truthfully; he'd respond angrily and eventually back down when he realizes he's being ridiculous, a while later. I think there needs to be more fire in the H/G dynamic--they are two highly passionate and yet intensely private people, who have the potential to make sparks fly even beyond what Ron and Hermione can achieve. |
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| Reviewer: Meagan | Date: 2004-09-25 |
| Reviewid: 99358 | Chapter: 1 |
| Way to go. I'm enjoying the expansion you've made on Ginny's character, while keeping up with cannon details. You're a great writer! |
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| Reviewer: Simon | Date: 2004-08-24 |
| Reviewid: 98386 | Chapter: 4 |
wow :)
That story captured something, for me, about pain and caring. Not to mentin the amount of thought that must have gone into some of the details in chapter 4. I think you really captured the essence of the series at the end of OotP better than most things I have read. I really enjoyed the story :) |
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| Reviewer: AUNT! | Date: 2004-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 98080 | Chapter: 4 |
| Oh my oh my oh my. It's even better than it was when it was merely great. Keep writing, by sunlight, full moon's bright blaze over the Wockie Mountains, or through the TV's blue haze....congrats. |
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| Reviewer: Purple Eyed Weasley | Date: 2004-08-18 |
| Reviewid: 97831 | Chapter: 4 |
This was such an amazing story. it was beautiful and meaningful. i like ur portrayal of Harry. it's pretty close to canon. I am so happy that ur gonna write a sequel. I hope it comes really soon.
Anyway, fantastic job on ur story. I hope to see more from u soon! |
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| Reviewer: Mieke | Date: 2004-08-18 |
| Reviewid: 97824 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love it! Please update soon! I like your writing style! Please Please Please update! |
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| Reviewer: Aristotle | Date: 2004-08-18 |
| Reviewid: 97780 | Chapter: 4 |
Wow! What a great fic! I've got tears in my eyes, and a warm fuzzy...
Great writing. The characters are portrayed just as well as they are in the actual series. Wonderful job, and I'm going to go off and read the rest of your fics! |
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| Reviewer: Beck | Date: 2004-08-18 |
| Reviewid: 97762 | Chapter: 4 |
| Woot im so glad you are doing a sequel i am looking forward to it =) loved the story so far |
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| Reviewer: someone | Date: 2004-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 97171 | Chapter: 1 |
| it was cute but a little out of character..like hermoine would leave school....but othere than that i liked it... |
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| Reviewer: St. Margarets | Date: 2004-07-14 |
| Reviewid: 92277 | Chapter: 3 |
I know I've read this somewhere else! Your Ginny is so sweet--just what Harry needs. You're doing a nice job with their progression as friends and also their considerable backstory.
I hope you will report those two ugly reviews. I don't understand it. This is an R/H, H/G site where authors should feel safe! Please don't take it as a reflection on your writing--or as a reflection on the people who are normally here at the Quill!
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| Reviewer: doesnt matter | Date: 2004-04-23 |
| Reviewid: 79916 | Chapter: 2 |
| i lyk this story! though i think that there should be H/G and R/H fluffy stuffy... |
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| Reviewer: Ted M. Hammett | Date: 2004-02-18 |
| Reviewid: 71317 | Chapter: 2 |
| Great chapter, I really enjoy Harry/Ginny stories, and I hope this becomes one. |
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| Reviewer: *LuNa* | Date: 2004-02-16 |
| Reviewid: 71054 | Chapter: 2 |
Another great chapter! Keep writing! I like how you express how much Ginny cares!
*The 1 and only LoOnY* |
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| Reviewer: line | Date: 2004-02-16 |
| Reviewid: 71053 | Chapter: 2 |
You are a wonderful writer!!!
I love this, and Harry seems so miserable, poor him....
It's perfect that Ginny notice all of this....
And I hope he'll be feeling better soon,
I am looking really much forward to read more,
~~Line |
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| Reviewer: Jenny M. | Date: 2004-02-16 |
| Reviewid: 70957 | Chapter: 2 |
| Awesome story... It's very interesting. I also noticed that it had a title of a Josh Groban song. I just happen to be a fan of him myself. Looking forward to reading more! |
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| Reviewer: Myster web | Date: 2004-02-12 |
| Reviewid: 70222 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very well done! I hope that there will be more! Please keep going...pretty please...? |
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