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Review(s): 16
| Reviewer: Allen | Date: 2005-08-16 |
| Reviewid: 130131 | Chapter: 1 |
| I agree with every word Sarah said. I didn't cringe a single time as I do with most H/R fluff. Very good fic, can I say: sequal please? lol |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2004-11-28 |
| Reviewid: 106191 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's a very sweet story! It's different to all the other predictable R/H fluff. I didn't cringe with this story! |
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| Reviewer: Christina | Date: 2004-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 98008 | Chapter: 1 |
| yay! this story was great...i love the sweetness in it. it's not exactly a big romance...and it's not exactly a friendship story either, i love that idea! great story! you HAVE to write a sequal of what happens to thier friendship the next day or something!! thanks! keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Gwendolyn | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70481 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very cute! It seems like a very natural event that could *hopefully* happen. Thanks for giving me something sweet to read! |
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| Reviewer: St. Margarets | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70467 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, those poor kids were so tired weren't they? This was very sweet. Ron had just the right amount of nervousness and courage. Hermione was vulnerable because she was so tired--it was good way to show her softer side when there wasn't much of shown in canon.
Good job! |
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| Reviewer: GryffinMiraur | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70387 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was very sweet. I'm glad you mentioned that it was hard for Ron and Hermione to deal with Harry. I also liked how you had them refer to challenging each other. I'd never thought of it that way before, but they do challenge each other. |
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| Reviewer: Azyne | Date: 2004-02-13 |
| Reviewid: 70381 | Chapter: 1 |
| All I can say is...aww! Seriously, it was well-written. I've got no criticism for you, as far as fluff goes. |
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| Reviewer: Lizzielu | Date: 2004-02-12 |
| Reviewid: 70366 | Chapter: 1 |
Awww just about sums it up! Like I said in my other review, you've really painted a scene with words. You really captured Ron and Hermione's worrying for Harry, and I too have alwas secretly thought that they enjoy their bickering at times. My favorite part was the last line.
Great job!
Lizzielu |
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