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Review(s): 16
| Reviewer: sweetie | Date: 2004-06-25 |
| Reviewid: 88858 | Chapter: 1 |
very well written! you got the characters down pat!
Great story! R/H forever!
luv sweetie |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2004-02-28 |
| Reviewid: 72454 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story is one of the only ones that you don't hear about the kiss! I like it a lot this way. It is so touching. Usually when I hear a story when we hear about the kiss, it's like a cheesy ending for a really good story. This way it makes it sound so good. Wonderful story! |
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| Reviewer: Gwendolyn | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72439 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awwwww! I like R/H fluff! So cute! If only we had gotten something like this in OotP and not Ron being completely clueless. I really like when you wrote "I wouldn't hesitate to 'Sonorus' my voice and shout for all of Hogwarts to know that Ron Weasley is now My Ron." For not only is it showing that Hermione is head-over-heels in love with Ron, but the "My Ron" reminds my of Jane Austen's "Emma." Great job! Let me know if you write anything else. |
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| Reviewer: Michelle | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72433 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm grinnin' like a fool, really! I'm such a hopeless romantic...It was perfect! I loved it! And I really can picture Hermione usings Sonorus to sing her heart out to all of Hogwarts..hehehe! Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Death Eater | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72424 | Chapter: 1 |
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! It's so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great fic. A sequal would be nice.
~Death Eater |
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| Reviewer: Megan | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72407 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm impressed! You wrote the prefects-on-patrol part before book 5? Anyway, that's pretty much how I envision Hermione's thought process on this issue, as well. And how I imagine she'd tell the story: clear, concise, and to the point. With just the right touch of romance. |
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| Reviewer: Melissa Renee | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72332 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very nice. I liked that Ron and Hermione's final conversation was very much a conversation between two nervous teenagers, who seemed very keen on not saying exactly what's on their minds, and not flowery prose fit for a romance novel. |
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| Reviewer: anonymous | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72305 | Chapter: 1 |
| beautiful little fluffly story! this is one of the few one-shot r/h stories that isn't badly written or uninteresting. kudos to you! |
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| Reviewer: Adele | Date: 2004-02-27 |
| Reviewid: 72296 | Chapter: 1 |
NANA! Hooray!!
This was gorgeous, dear. The best I've seen from you! I'm very sad, though, that I didn't get to be the first one to review this. :(
I love how the ending makes the readers guess. And, I was right - it's fine with canon, just as a "missing moment". I'm sure there's been something going on between them. ;)
Talk to me more! I miss you muchly. |
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