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Review(s): 17
| Reviewer: Arimalka | Date: 2006-01-04 |
| Reviewid: 138019 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so...sad, and touching. It's really one of the best stories I've read. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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| Reviewer: imacrazyperson | Date: 2005-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 115985 | Chapter: 1 |
dude where did u get the name icarus from?
like ur story you should make some art... though the way you write it i could almost see it |
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| Reviewer: Steve Calabrese | Date: 2004-03-10 |
| Reviewid: 73910 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. Is there going to be more? I know that there's a "finis" at the end, but this story is just BEGGING for more... |
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| Reviewer: Coquillage | Date: 2004-03-10 |
| Reviewid: 73908 | Chapter: 1 |
| I do hope you are going to continue and write more of this story. You set up such an intriguing universe of your own and describe it so well, and you've left us with too many unanswered questions. I feel for your Ron, bouncing from job to job and not at peace with himself or anything else. (The only thing I'm not taken with is sleep-around Harry. Just can't see it. But that's me.) Hoping for more Ron... |
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| Reviewer: Aerin | Date: 2004-03-10 |
| Reviewid: 73893 | Chapter: 1 |
| Whoa. Take my breath away. Amazing story, just about blew me away. The plot is fantastic, although not to my usual tastes, and it plunges rather far in the future with several holes. But it's a spiffy tale; it was very keenly written and nicely done. |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2004-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 73767 | Chapter: 1 |
What the heck! The story's over... just like that?!?
Well... it was good, though I wish there was more.
Sarah ^_^ |
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| Reviewer: Bobcat Moran | Date: 2004-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 73755 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, wow, this was brilliant. You had me hooked from the first paragraph, with Ron blearily wandering into the blindingly bright kitchen, right up through, "I'm sorry, honey." Great job with creating this version of post-Hogwarts HP (er, that would be HP the series, not the character, although he was certainly interesting in this story as well). |
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| Reviewer: Frankie | Date: 2004-03-08 |
| Reviewid: 73709 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. What a wonderful piece. Very depressing, but wonderful. I love the fact that Ron stood up for what he believed in, throwing everything back in the face of adversity. How very. . . Ronesque. Nice use of other cannon characters! I love the idea of Penny being his lawyer. I hope you continue this story so we can see how everything turns out. |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-03-08 |
| Reviewid: 73674 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story is too good to be a one-shot. I was on the edge of my chair the entire time I was reading this story. The pacing is perfect, the plot twists and turns tantalizing, and if I ever read a cliffhanger, your ending certainly is one! This is definitely a story I will be coming back to many times since I know I'll get more out of it each time I read it. Again, please don't let this be the end... |
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| Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits | Date: 2004-03-07 |
| Reviewid: 73578 | Chapter: 1 |
::sniffs::
Wow, um, that was, um...wow.
Completely unexpected and very well written. Thank god it's just an AU, or I'd be shaken to the bones. Urgh, the wizarding world at its most disgusting. I especially liked the Siberia-milk touch.
other than that, I don't know what to say. Probably you should put a warning at the top for language, that was much more than I expected in an undisclaimered story.
write more soon,
~TPR |
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| Reviewer: story645 | Date: 2004-03-07 |
| Reviewid: 73529 | Chapter: 1 |
| will there be any more? Very interesting, really want to learn how this came about and what will happen. Would be nice to get an explantion for Harry sleeping with everything that wears skirts unders thier robes. Hermione and Ron seem to be pretty much in character, though I can't see Ron willingly getting involved in corruption. |
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| Reviewer: Opaleyz | Date: 2004-03-06 |
| Reviewid: 73388 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ok, so when you wrote "finis," you just meant the end of the first chapter, right? ---Because this is far too good to be confined to one chapter. Your characterizations are great, as are the descriptions of surroundings. Very realistic tone. Please continue with this fic! I'm wondering about what happened to get the characters where they are, what's happened to Ginny, why is *Malfoy* managing Harry's accounts, what Harry does during the day, more about the twins, what's going to happen w/ Quidditch & Ron...the list of questions goes on :) Please continue! |
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