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Dumbledore's Army
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Review(s): 5

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-12-12
Reviewid: 137039Chapter: 1
Very Nicely Done

Reviewer: KewiiDate: 2004-10-26
Reviewid: 102551Chapter: 1
an interesting analysis into Bellatrix.

I've never really thought of her attacking the Longbottoms out of despair, it works. I just always thought she did it because she was a horrible person.

Good work.

Reviewer: FrankieDate: 2004-03-11
Reviewid: 74089Chapter: 1
Wow. I am at a loss for words. Amazing.

Reviewer: GufaDate: 2004-03-11
Reviewid: 74048Chapter: 1
This is a seriously chilling fic, and your writing does justice to the subject. The way she just thinks/speaks so simply is excellent.

Reviewer: Olive HornbyDate: 2004-03-11
Reviewid: 73955Chapter: 1
You've done a good job of capturing how Bellatrix is consumed by her devotion to Voldemort. I like how you described Voldemort as the only constant in her world, and how she loses her sense of self when he is stopped the first time. The glimpses you give into her relationships with Sirius and Narcissa in particular were very interesting. You touch on many subjects without going deeply into anything, and it works well with the voice you chose. Good story!

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