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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: Melusina | Date: 2006-05-22 |
| Reviewid: 142960 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. So chilling. You could really see Bellatrix playing around with poor Peter's mind. The whole thing was very believable. |
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| Reviewer: Raven | Date: 2005-01-30 |
| Reviewid: 112494 | Chapter: 1 |
You captured Bellatrix perfectly. How she just would ease Peter to trusting her. It...just unnerved me. Bellatrix scared me. She was just so... not evil but... evil.
Yes, I am aware this doesn't make sense.
"Bellatrix watched as Peter walked towards Hogwarts. “Naïve fool,” she muttered. “As if he doesn’t realize I know he could only have been here a half hour.”"
I don't understand this line at all. What do you mean? Half an hour.
I just realised what that meant. He got away from Bellatrix. He was feeling uncomftable.
Now I've put my brain back in, I am impressed.
Raven |
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| Reviewer: Becky | Date: 2004-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 98220 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's spooky. I've always wondered how Peter went over the dark side and I think you've got it right. I really liked how you made Peter so guide-able, I could really see Bellatrix molding his mind, feeding off his fears and insecurities. |
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| Reviewer: riv | Date: 2004-03-26 |
| Reviewid: 75916 | Chapter: 1 |
| i found this interesting.... but kinda lcking/.... i thought that the plot was awesmoe.....but it got kind of boring..... still... i rea dit till the end so hey... something was hangin me on...... keep it up=) |
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| Reviewer: Frankie | Date: 2004-03-22 |
| Reviewid: 75499 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very nice. I was wondering how on earth you were going to justify Bellatrix being. . . nice. Good job with the hints about dark pasts for each of them. I always wondered how Peter was brought over to Voldie, and this is a great idea. Nicely done! |
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| Reviewer: Vix | Date: 2004-03-22 |
| Reviewid: 75498 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a really good fic, it is really thoughtful. It definitely fits in with everybody's character descriptions, and we can see that Bellatrix is well on her way to becoming pure evil! |
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