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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2004-06-01 |
| Reviewid: 85513 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was so… lovely. I love how you showed the relationship between Sirius and Lupin- and the whole Snufles thing. I’m glad Sirius listened to Lupin- even though he died anyway. Its so sad now Lupins the only one left of the Marauders. You are very good at portraying Sirius’ character especially. Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: quitesirius | Date: 2004-05-30 |
| Reviewid: 85232 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was so beautifully written and realistic. I felt every emotion of both Sirius and Remus, and I cried. Your descriptions of how Sirius felt and how he couldn't remember his memories of the others... *sniffle* |
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| Reviewer: Mani | Date: 2004-05-20 |
| Reviewid: 83745 | Chapter: 1 |
| rrrrrrrr, remus giving sirius a massage, now that's my kind of fantasy! lol! very well done! |
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| Reviewer: Maar | Date: 2004-03-27 |
| Reviewid: 76019 | Chapter: 1 |
| Sad,so good,but so sad.Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttt! |
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| Reviewer: Taylor | Date: 2004-03-23 |
| Reviewid: 75748 | Chapter: 1 |
| Really great moment - true to canon and well thought out... Remus and Sirius are characterized excellently. |
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| Reviewer: Liz | Date: 2004-03-23 |
| Reviewid: 75741 | Chapter: 1 |
| The interaction between them ...I wish more people would write about it, seriously. Great piece of work, and spot on characterization on two very difficult characters. :) |
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| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-03-22 |
| Reviewid: 75582 | Chapter: 1 |
| Perfect! You've got Remus and Sirius's relationship down perfectly. Their characters are completely true to canon, and I can imagine this as one of the few JK-worthy missing moments between books. Good job! |
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| Reviewer: hairy_hen | Date: 2004-03-22 |
| Reviewid: 75535 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awesome job. I'm impressed with how well you characterized the bitterness that Sirius has carried with him all these years, and how you show that he only has his anger to fall back on, and can barely remember anything about the good times. I like how Remus helps him let go of his hatred and start over. It's so sad how he barely got any time and now he's gone again--leaving Remus to that guilt all over again. Well done! |
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