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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: Asev | Date: 2004-07-24 |
| Reviewid: 93856 | Chapter: 1 |
| Amazing story. I've decided to stay up into the wee hours of the morning to read the rest of your stuff. *grins* Great job, really. You did an excellent job starting the story, leading to Remus' eventual breakdown at the end... |
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| Reviewer: ~Pheonix~I know I spelled that wrong | Date: 2004-07-24 |
| Reviewid: 93835 | Chapter: 1 |
| Remus, *sob* Lily and James, *sob*, SIRIUS!!!! *sobthe hardest* i luv 'em all, they are cool and fun and awsome! mainyl Remus and Sirius, cuz we know them 2! |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-06-22 |
| Reviewid: 88343 | Chapter: 1 |
Absolutely heart-wrenching. Remus' denial in this is so wholly unintentional, and his realization when he is giving the eulogy is amazing. My only complaint is the itallics before every paragraph. I think they distract from the story a bit, and this is such a wonderful piece of work. . .
Truly, this is great. Wonderful job! |
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| Reviewer: Jordan | Date: 2004-05-13 |
| Reviewid: 82467 | Chapter: 1 |
| OMG! you had me in tears! I absolutely love Reamus and Sirius and all of the MWPP (except Peter) But you literately moved me to tears! I loved it |
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| Reviewer: Alexandria | Date: 2004-05-12 |
| Reviewid: 82312 | Chapter: 1 |
Aw, Heck... *sniffle*
Poor Remus... I hope he and Harry end up finding support in each other, they both need a shoulder to lean on. I really enjoyed this story too! You and your heart-wrenching-ness. ;-) |
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| Reviewer: Moon Goddess | Date: 2004-04-01 |
| Reviewid: 76678 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very nice piece. I liked especially when you wrote "Why does it hurt to smile?" and we knew he was starting to grasp the truth. However I found your line: "I think they call it "after the flowers are gone" when you stop denying that the loved ones you’ve lost are dead." a bit convoluted. It's an important thought and I think it could be written with more clarity. I also found your single quotation marks to indicate thuoghts confusing. Perhaps italics would work better? |
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| Reviewer: Gyakutenno | Date: 2004-03-31 |
| Reviewid: 76557 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ah, but it's odd sometimes, to get over it. You're scared you're forgetting... maybe you are. Okay, aaanyhow, poor Remus... except isn't ignorance bliss, anyway? |
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| Reviewer: Lady Narcissa | Date: 2004-03-31 |
| Reviewid: 76535 | Chapter: 1 |
| Congratulations on getting here! :) I still like the concept behind this story, and the s-l-o-w realization that occurs. Welcome to the Quill. |
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