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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-04-09 |
| Reviewid: 77859 | Chapter: 1 |
Another well-written story. I really like this series and am looking forward to reading the next issue. I’m glad Sirius and James invaded Ron’s dreams: you did a really good job of keeping to canon and showing just how much Ron cares about Harry. I can actually picture this conversation happening.
As for the “Harry Hair” product for Weasley’s Wizarding Wheezes, my three-year-old son already seems to use it. We have a rule in our house “comb your hair once a day whether it needs it or not” and five minutes after, his hair is just as messy as it was before he combed it! What a great idea to surprise Harry with! I’d love to read about the results with Bill... |
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| Reviewer: Rosebeth | Date: 2004-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 77724 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is wonderful. It was great to see James and Sirius pushing the Harry/Ginny idea also that Harry and Remus are talking with the mirrors. I hope you do more. |
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| Reviewer: Are | Date: 2004-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 77719 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is good. I like it, I think it's funny. Just one little bit of constructive critism here. I love your story, but I think it sounds better to said, "We're" instead of "We are". It just sounds neater. |
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| Reviewer: Jaquelyne | Date: 2004-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 77666 | Chapter: 1 |
I just read all three of these shorts and they are a great. I love the conversations. Sirius and James imparting their wisdom to friends and family. The twins conversation should be interesting.
If you do plan to continue this, I would love to see Lily visiting Ginny to impart her years of dealing with a Potter male and Sirius and James trying to give advice on how to get Harry to notice her.
~J~ |
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| Reviewer: Sue | Date: 2004-04-06 |
| Reviewid: 77438 | Chapter: 1 |
| These are getting better and better. Harry Hair - very clever.I am really looking forward to Fred & George's visit. |
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| Reviewer: DSDragon | Date: 2004-04-06 |
| Reviewid: 77401 | Chapter: 1 |
| I would definitely like to see more of this series. Especially the "promised" visits to Dumbledore and Fred & George. And maybe Ginny too? |
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