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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: Moon Goddess | Date: 2004-04-15 |
| Reviewid: 78880 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very funny. I think you have Luna perfectly and the muggle child too! What was the rabbit with the horn allusion? A play wand? |
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| Reviewer: Author By Night | Date: 2004-04-09 |
| Reviewid: 77832 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was good; however, I have to Britpick. In Britain, they don't really make a big deal out of Halloween, at least from what I understood when I lived in Europe. Also, why was this girl home from Hogwarts? Sorry, I hate saying things like that, but I also felt you might want to know. On the bright side, this was very cute. :) Was the girl anyone we know? |
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| Reviewer: Sinyaa | Date: 2004-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 77735 | Chapter: 1 |
| Lol, you'd think most wizards would have muggle proof wards around their houses, but it would just be like the Lovegoods to forget such things wouldn't it? This story was funny. Poor kid. |
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| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-04-07 |
| Reviewid: 77591 | Chapter: 1 |
This was cute! You've got Luna down perfectly--I love how she took the candy. Creative idea--I'd love to see more of your writing.
-Linnet |
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