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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: nightcrawler1089 | Date: 2005-01-30 |
| Reviewid: 112521 | Chapter: 1 |
| Snape IS mean. I always wondered how he "let slip" Lupin's condition. Nice story--I like Dumb Crabbe. |
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| Reviewer: IK"M ELEVEN 11 SO I"M GETTING MY LETTER | Date: 2005-01-30 |
| Reviewid: 112508 | Chapter: 1 |
11!!!!!!LOVED IT BABY YA!!!!1!!!!11
`~IKI"M ELEVEN 11 SO I"M GETTING MY LETTER FROM HOGWARTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Queenie | Date: 2004-04-18 |
| Reviewid: 79261 | Chapter: 1 |
Ooooh... a very clever way of telling, pure dialogue like that. Of course, this is how Snape would do it... he wouldn't just say, "By the way, did you hear Lupin's a werewolf? Pass me the jam, will you?" -- that's kind of how I pictured it beforehand. Very well-done.
~Q |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-04-14 |
| Reviewid: 78669 | Chapter: 1 |
| Evil! I knew Snap was evil and you've just proven it...and what an appropriate a story with the third movie just months away,too! You have Professor Snape down to a science. Bravo! |
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| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-04-13 |
| Reviewid: 78569 | Chapter: 1 |
Grr. Die, Snape, die. Poor Remus...anyway, this was an excellent and plausible missing moment. Love it!
-Linnet |
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| Reviewer: Miss E Bennett | Date: 2004-04-13 |
| Reviewid: 78502 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooooh! He's so ... evil. Very well written--I was wondering how he'd say it, as Snape's not the type to just say, "Oh, yes, by the way, Lupin's a werewolf." Your way is perfect, especially with the: "I have always regarded as more than equal to ... " |
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| Reviewer: Mincot | Date: 2004-04-13 |
| Reviewid: 78460 | Chapter: 1 |
| Another short gem. I always wondered how Snape coupld possibly have let it slip, and there it is. I found myself thinking of the character Francis Urquhart, right after he had led someone to a false conclusion--or to a damaging correct one. "You might well think that," he would say. "I couldn't possibly comment." |
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| Reviewer: Anjerla | Date: 2004-04-13 |
| Reviewid: 78441 | Chapter: 1 |
*sputters incoherently* Slimy-no good-son of a-STUPID JERK!
What a prat!
*begins to walk away with almost no commentary on how beautifully done and well-written this story is* ...oh, wait...that counts as commentary...well, I might as well do it properly:
This was beautifully done! Very well written, I want to murder him in cold blood...Fantastic! |
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