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Review(s): 13
| Reviewer: CornedBee | Date: 2004-06-08 |
| Reviewid: 86373 | Chapter: 1 |
| A little weird, but very nice. A thousand words seems so much at first, but when we actually write something we like... |
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| Reviewer: Annika | Date: 2004-04-25 |
| Reviewid: 80074 | Chapter: 1 |
| Extremely profound and in-character with Hermione. I loved it, it's definitely one of my favorite fics. I love the confusing sense of it, because it contains the emotions so well. You understand exactly how Hermione is feeling and you understand...everything... |
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| Reviewer: Me | Date: 2004-04-25 |
| Reviewid: 80048 | Chapter: 1 |
| Yes, that was slightly confusing... but if it was a dream... then my dreams are equally confusing... actually... it reminds me of my dreams... in gernal I mean, I dont dream about the Forbidden Forest or anything... LoL |
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| Reviewer: ??? | Date: 2004-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 80017 | Chapter: 1 |
| wow i love it there all in carector to tired and annoied at my sister to spell big words right anywaythis was wonderful.!! loved it |
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| Reviewer: GryffinMiraur | Date: 2004-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 80000 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was lovely. You have a definite talent for imagery. I could see everything Hermione was seeing. You also kept her in character very well. |
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| Reviewer: Sehila | Date: 2004-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 79952 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow. That was beautiful. And profound. (If there was a way to italicize things using the keyboard I would've italicized 'profound' because this story was truly beautiful)
Great job. Keep writing. |
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| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 79943 | Chapter: 1 |
Tired as I am, I had to review this, because it's just beautiful. What really triggered me was this line:
"Trees had ancient magic, too. They were Secret-Keepers of the earth, really…"
It made me happy, because I love trees. =)
-Linnet |
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| Reviewer: story645 | Date: 2004-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 79938 | Chapter: 1 |
"Of course - the trees " is that a reference to the R/Hr motto?
Great fic, kind of trippy, but that seems to be what you were going for. Hermione is very in character, especially when she tries to reason everything she is seeing. I liked how you put in all these great messages and themes, and carried it off with out the fic becoming preachy or pretentious. Your writing is wonderful. |
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| Reviewer: Michelle | Date: 2004-04-23 |
| Reviewid: 79808 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow! That was so good. You did an amazing job using words to paint a picture. I got goosebumps when I read the part when Harry comes into Hermione's dream. I don't even jknow what to tell you except that I wish I could write like that... |
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