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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 13

Reviewer: YouLickBumsDate: 2006-08-31
Reviewid: 145105Chapter: 1
SERIOUSLY WTF
i don't get it..
like at all.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-07-06
Reviewid: 126133Chapter: 1
Good Stuff

Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2004-06-08
Reviewid: 86373Chapter: 1
A little weird, but very nice. A thousand words seems so much at first, but when we actually write something we like...

Reviewer: AnnikaDate: 2004-04-25
Reviewid: 80074Chapter: 1
Extremely profound and in-character with Hermione. I loved it, it's definitely one of my favorite fics. I love the confusing sense of it, because it contains the emotions so well. You understand exactly how Hermione is feeling and you understand...everything...

Reviewer: MeDate: 2004-04-25
Reviewid: 80048Chapter: 1
Yes, that was slightly confusing... but if it was a dream... then my dreams are equally confusing... actually... it reminds me of my dreams... in gernal I mean, I dont dream about the Forbidden Forest or anything... LoL

Reviewer: ???Date: 2004-04-24
Reviewid: 80017Chapter: 1
wow i love it there all in carector to tired and annoied at my sister to spell big words right anywaythis was wonderful.!! loved it

Reviewer: BethDate: 2004-04-24
Reviewid: 80014Chapter: 1
very good...and interesting.....very in character :)
beth xx

Reviewer: GryffinMiraurDate: 2004-04-24
Reviewid: 80000Chapter: 1
That was lovely. You have a definite talent for imagery. I could see everything Hermione was seeing. You also kept her in character very well.

Reviewer: SehilaDate: 2004-04-24
Reviewid: 79952Chapter: 1
Wow. That was beautiful. And profound. (If there was a way to italicize things using the keyboard I would've italicized 'profound' because this story was truly beautiful)
Great job. Keep writing.

Reviewer: LinnetDate: 2004-04-24
Reviewid: 79943Chapter: 1
Tired as I am, I had to review this, because it's just beautiful. What really triggered me was this line:

"Trees had ancient magic, too. They were Secret-Keepers of the earth, really…"

It made me happy, because I love trees. =)

-Linnet

Reviewer: story645Date: 2004-04-24
Reviewid: 79938Chapter: 1
"Of course - the trees " is that a reference to the R/Hr motto?
Great fic, kind of trippy, but that seems to be what you were going for. Hermione is very in character, especially when she tries to reason everything she is seeing. I liked how you put in all these great messages and themes, and carried it off with out the fic becoming preachy or pretentious. Your writing is wonderful.

Reviewer: BeccaDate: 2004-04-23
Reviewid: 79895Chapter: 1
Wow...I'm speechless...

-Becca-

Reviewer: MichelleDate: 2004-04-23
Reviewid: 79808Chapter: 1
Wow! That was so good. You did an amazing job using words to paint a picture. I got goosebumps when I read the part when Harry comes into Hermione's dream. I don't even jknow what to tell you except that I wish I could write like that...

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