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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2004-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 86144 | Chapter: 1 |
Was this your first story? It was very good.
Short and sweet and emotional, I loved it! It's perfectly paced and with a lovely ending that really does remind us, very subtly, how important these moments are.
Can't wait to see more of your work. Well done! |
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| Reviewer: Eirene | Date: 2004-05-09 |
| Reviewid: 81791 | Chapter: 1 |
Awwwww..... that's so sweet!
"James leaned his head against the door and mouthed the words along with her cringing." - I can totally picture this.
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"Thank you. Thank you for asking me to marry you." He didn't know quite what to say. She was thanking him?
"I didn't. You did." - hahha. |
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| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-05-09 |
| Reviewid: 81788 | Chapter: 1 |
This was so cute! Very original way for Lily and James to get engaged--keep writing!
-Linnet |
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