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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-02-07
Reviewid: 113175Chapter: 1
well done thank you

Reviewer: SarahDate: 2004-06-07
Reviewid: 86144Chapter: 1
Was this your first story? It was very good.

Short and sweet and emotional, I loved it! It's perfectly paced and with a lovely ending that really does remind us, very subtly, how important these moments are.

Can't wait to see more of your work. Well done!

Reviewer: TabeaDate: 2004-05-11
Reviewid: 82234Chapter: 1
What a "perfect", and hilarious ficlet! Please write some more stories!

Reviewer: FrankieDate: 2004-05-10
Reviewid: 82056Chapter: 1
Very sweet, and exactly the kind of thing I can imagine happening. Great job!

Reviewer: EireneDate: 2004-05-09
Reviewid: 81791Chapter: 1
Awwwww..... that's so sweet!

"James leaned his head against the door and mouthed the words along with her cringing." - I can totally picture this.
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"Thank you. Thank you for asking me to marry you." He didn't know quite what to say. She was thanking him?

"I didn't. You did." - hahha.

Reviewer: LinnetDate: 2004-05-09
Reviewid: 81788Chapter: 1
This was so cute! Very original way for Lily and James to get engaged--keep writing!

-Linnet

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