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Review(s): 12
| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-05-11 |
| Reviewid: 82100 | Chapter: 1 |
I love this! You don't see many Andromeda fics out there...
*hurries off to work on her own Andromeda fic*
-Linnet |
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| Reviewer: Katie Bell | Date: 2004-05-10 |
| Reviewid: 82082 | Chapter: 1 |
Very good. This story seems scarily similar to something I would have done as a young child.
~~Katie Bell |
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| Reviewer: Frankie | Date: 2004-05-10 |
| Reviewid: 82049 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great story, and I like the format you chose for this, it's a very compelling way to show Andromeda's emotions. Wondeerful! |
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| Reviewer: Aerin | Date: 2004-05-10 |
| Reviewid: 81948 | Chapter: 1 |
Happy Mother's Day! What a fitting story--a young mom's worry and fierce will...and hilarious little Tonks popping up at the end. I love the use of dialogue just plopped into the story without quotations...works wonderfully. Keep writing!
Aerin |
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| Reviewer: Megan | Date: 2004-05-09 |
| Reviewid: 81872 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very nice rythm to your writing, with an understated crescendo as Andromeda's fear borders hysteria. I loved it. I'm still gonna grumble, though, about you putting the Ministry in Diagon Alley... |
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