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Review(s): 9
| Reviewer: shiiki | Date: 2006-04-30 |
| Reviewid: 142394 | Chapter: 1 |
| I nearly stopped reading this when I came across three OCs ... but I carried on just that little bit more and then the tale that the three children had to tell had me captivated! You did Moody very well! I really would love to see him continue to interact with those children. For a moment, before I'd figured out the timeline, though, I imagined the girl would be Lisa Turpin. I suppose my only lament would be that you didn't have the Muggle-born boy as someone we would get to see in a passing mention in the books. |
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| Reviewer: Jetamors | Date: 2004-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 95284 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like this fic a lot. The OCs are interesting, Moody is well characterized, and the situation is well plotted. The only tiny nitpick is that I don't get the impression from the books that Fidelius is nearly this easy to cast. Other than that, though, this is an excellent fic. Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Morag Ryan | Date: 2004-05-29 |
| Reviewid: 85184 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, I love it! Magnificent look at the "disturbance" at Moody's house. I searched you out after I read about your love of Moody in the forums and I'm SO glad I did -- this is utterly wonderful. The bit where Lisa is cautious about drinking what Moody offers and Moody's very serious response just clinched the brilliant characterisation for me -- it's so quintessentially moody. |
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| Reviewer: Meagan | Date: 2004-01-24 |
| Reviewid: 68254 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved the story. The kids were cute and I liked the way Moody handled them. Keep on writing! |
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| Reviewer: Myster web | Date: 2003-09-29 |
| Reviewid: 54745 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was really touching. I also like how you wove history with Harry Potter's world. please keep on writing. |
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| Reviewer: Ozma | Date: 2002-11-16 |
| Reviewid: 9245 | Chapter: 1 |
This is another of your stories that I read and loved ages ago, but didn't review. Better late than never...
Dennis, Lisa and Jeremy are delightful children; warm and very real. The scene where Rosier's wand works for Jeremy is one of my favorite story scenes ever!
I really enjoy the way that you write Moody! Gruff, unconventional, a true maverick, but under all the scars and the magic eye he's a decent and good person. I especially enjoyed it when he praised Lisa for being reluctant to drink the cocoa. ("Constant Vigilance!" :-)) |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2002-07-28 |
| Reviewid: 128 | Chapter: 1 |
(Originally posted 1/24/02 11:23:36 pm)
Moody stories...oh yeah!
Seldes, I will let you know flat out that Moody is one of my favorite characters. I think he's as interesting as all get out, and I am so pleased that you are developing and using him in interesting stories that integrate both canon and original characters. You write well. Your writing background shows.
I think so much of Moody I'm trying to give him some family in the HP works that I'm writing, starting with his niece Amanda. But that's another conversation.
I just wanted to thank you for bringing one of my favorite, and in my opinion, one of the most neglected, Potter characters to life.
Thank you.
Catherine |
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