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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Disturbing Dream
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-07-11
Reviewid: 126774Chapter: 1
An excellent piece

Reviewer: hairy_henDate: 2004-05-22
Reviewid: 83946Chapter: 1
Very good portrayal of Hermione's fears about the return of Voldemort, merged with what could have happened differently in Chamber of Secrets. It leads nicely into the Dark Mark events at the World Cup, but of course it's a relief to see that Ginny is still alive. Good job working in Ginny's newly discovered "real name." I'm so glad it wasn't Virginia after all . . .

Nicely done!

Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2004-05-21
Reviewid: 83877Chapter: 1
Ok, disregard my comment about the thing being incomplete. Maybe you should make it more obvious that Arthur waking Hermione is NOT part of the dream, as I thought it was.

Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2004-05-21
Reviewid: 83876Chapter: 1
Disturbing. Very well written, but it feels kinda... incomplete. I think you should add something to the end.

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