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Reviews for: Leaving Day
Review(s): 11

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-12-07
Reviewid: 136834Chapter: 1
too short

Reviewer: NarumiDate: 2005-07-06
Reviewid: 126198Chapter: 1
oh, that was beautiful!

Reviewer: SomeoneDate: 2004-05-23
Reviewid: 84096Chapter: 1
That rocks.

Reviewer: LinnetDate: 2004-05-23
Reviewid: 84089Chapter: 1
I adore Lily/James, and this was a wonderful and touching missing moment. Keep writing!

-Linnet

Reviewer: CGDate: 2004-05-22
Reviewid: 84030Chapter: 1
You don't see a lot of wonderful L/J pieces nowadays, and I'm glad I stumbled onto your story- BEAUTIFUL:)

Reviewer: StarseaDate: 2004-05-22
Reviewid: 84029Chapter: 1
This is such a lovely story - short but full of insight into both Lily and James. I love the little revelation at the end, and the way she doesn't need to tell him, he just knows.

Great writing, as usual.

xxx~Starsea~xxx

Reviewer: hairy_henDate: 2004-05-22
Reviewid: 83945Chapter: 1
Ah, excellent, a story about Lily's feelings about James by the end of seventh year. Very well portrayed, how completely their relationship turned around in the time after what we saw of them in book five. I'm all excited after reading this. Nicely done!

Reviewer: DarogaDate: 2004-05-21
Reviewid: 83900Chapter: 1
God, I love your writing. This is gorgeous.

Reviewer: FrankieDate: 2004-05-21
Reviewid: 83858Chapter: 1
Wow. What a beautiful little piece. Love the imagery, and the last line is superb. Fantastic job!

Reviewer: CoquillageDate: 2004-05-21
Reviewid: 83786Chapter: 1
Beautiful and bittersweet. You've painted these few moments with giddiness and wonderment and love, and made us feel, in a very short space, the longing that came before, the bond that defines them in their present day, and both the hope and foreboding of their future. It's easy to see the love and strength they pass on to Harry. Bravo.

Reviewer: ShinaLarisDate: 2004-05-21
Reviewid: 83779Chapter: 1
Love your short ficlet! It's so sweet (and a bit sad at first, too). Great job!

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