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| Reviewer: Potioncat | Date: 2004-11-22 |
| Reviewid: 105521 | Chapter: 1 |
Severus hoped fervently that Black would be Sorted into Hufflepuff. Perhaps the Hat would mistake incessancy for persistence.
I don't know if I like that line best, or Severus' short letter to his father. I think you did a nice job of showing the younger versions of the adults. And particularly good job of showing Severus Snape's attitude without making him seem evil. |
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| Reviewer: Eir de Scania | Date: 2004-05-31 |
| Reviewid: 85345 | Chapter: 1 |
The marauders first train ride to Hogwarts probably wasnīt like this - but it could very well have been :)
I read the Lily-Petunia part on your LJ and really liked it. The Black-Snape- families-interaction is SO believable! And of course it makes more sense that Sirius would try to make friends with someone he thought would be his house-mate!
Just one thing; the (future) Longbottoms just canīt have been the same year as the rest. When they were tortured, people were upset because they were well-known and popular Aurors. At least to me it sounds like they had been at the job for a few years. |
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| Reviewer: anna M | Date: 2004-05-29 |
| Reviewid: 85161 | Chapter: 1 |
This is brilliant. The scene with Sirius and Severus sitting on the train together is priceless.
It's wonderful to see a Marauder's fic that seems to be sticking to canon. I'm really looking forward to reading future chapters.
Well done! |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2004-05-29 |
| Reviewid: 85122 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow! What can I say? That was without doubt the best Harry Potter fic I have read so far, and I am not exaggerating. You got all the characters down to a tee. I love your portrayal of Black and Snape, especially. And the bit with Petunia at the beginning made me want to cry. Incredible writing, keep it up! |
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| Reviewer: Sergeant Majorette | Date: 2004-05-28 |
| Reviewid: 85024 | Chapter: 1 |
Completely adorable, and perfectly in character! I especially love the letters home.
And your Sirius --"a bit mental"-- nicely creepy foreshadowing of what he becomes; James is a doll, I wish I could just pinch his cheeks and give him a big wet auntie kiss! |
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| Reviewer: Daroga | Date: 2004-05-28 |
| Reviewid: 84968 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh my! I love it! Over Sea, Under Stone, Narnia, everything! All the characters are spot on accurate, which is saying something. Congratu-fucking-lations, Robin Hood and Little John. Hee hee. Although I think you're letter days might be off a little; it only took two days for Sirius and James to make up? |
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| Reviewer: Wendy | Date: 2004-05-28 |
| Reviewid: 84941 | Chapter: 1 |
Well done, I really liked this! I would love some more chapters. I can already see in the letters some really interesting relationships happening.
I like that there are just a few surprises aswell; the Sirius/Snape part was really great.
Please make this a year long story. It could be great! |
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| Reviewer: Linnet | Date: 2004-05-28 |
| Reviewid: 84914 | Chapter: 1 |
Is this story going to be continuing? Because it has amazing potential. Seriously. I love a good MWPP era story, and this is one great one here.
I love your views on James and Sirius--exactly how I imagined it! I love your Remus, and felt very sorry for Petunia, yet angry at the same time. Keep writing!
-Linnet |
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| Reviewer: Ling Ling | Date: 2004-05-28 |
| Reviewid: 84898 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like it. It's definitly a diffrent idea (and I like the Chronicals of Narnia references :-D ) |
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