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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: NialDate: 2005-09-04
Reviewid: 131701Chapter: 1
So beautiful; alone but triumphant at the end. You make us feel for both women, and your descriptions are wonderful.
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Reviewer: birdsongDate: 2004-06-01
Reviewid: 85486Chapter: 1
Enjoyed your story and your writing style. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewer: DonDate: 2004-05-31
Reviewid: 85384Chapter: 1
Wonderful. I love the visuals. The use of light and shadow. You concentrate on it so much at the beginning that I wasn't prepared for its importance when Voldemort showed. This has emotion seeping out everywhere.

I especially like the adversarial relationship between the two women. I was glad that you gave it some exposition. It was very sweet.

I really like the almost miminalist way you depict the spell. Her last effort.

Great work!
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Reviewer: Emil. E .EtymDate: 2004-05-30
Reviewid: 85328Chapter: 1
Confusing! I'll have to read it again.
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