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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 86274 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ha! Great missing moment fic. I never thought about how he would have gotten off the train and back home. |
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| Reviewer: Birgit | Date: 2004-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 86252 | Chapter: 1 |
This is a really sweet story. It must be hard to capture innocent, eleven-year-old Harry after reading OotP!Harry, but you did it brilliantly. Harry is really cute in this story. And Uncle Vernon is really Uncle Vernon, but I wouldn't call him cute or sweet...
Great job! I really liked it how you answered the "how did the Dursleys come back to Privet Drive" question as well. And Hagrid telling the Dursleys to get Harry at the station -- the very idea makes me laugh! |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 86182 | Chapter: 1 |
What a nice little story. You answered quite a few of the questions I've had for a while. Thanks. Also, I love your characterization of Vernon Dursley. You've done a really good job of him...Harry, too.
Please post again soon. I enjoyed your story and look forward to more of your work. |
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| Reviewer: Author By Night | Date: 2004-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 86156 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, this is an interesting insight! If JKR ever visits this site, she should read this fanfic, I'd love to know what she'd think. |
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