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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: xMarauderx | Date: 2007-01-21 |
| Reviewid: 146939 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hey this was really great...I loved the twins prank on Ron and using Ginny was really their style. All in all, it was a petty good description of the Weasley family and I think you did all the characters great. |
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| Reviewer: Purple Eyed Weasley | Date: 2004-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 89788 | Chapter: 1 |
This story is really sweet! I luv how ur characters are very like themselves. I can really see all of them behaving this way. I also love how much mischief brave little Ginny got in.
Fantastic job! |
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| Reviewer: sweetie | Date: 2004-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 89127 | Chapter: 1 |
SO CUTE! i could actually picture Ginny doing something like that on Fred and George's orders! i'm glad she felt bad later about making little Ronnie cry. so sweet! great story!
luv sweetie |
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| Reviewer: Author By Night | Date: 2004-06-16 |
| Reviewid: 87374 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, that was so cute! I like how you wrote the kids very well according to their ages. |
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| Reviewer: Phoebe | Date: 2004-06-15 |
| Reviewid: 87213 | Chapter: 1 |
| It was really funny, and i woz wonderin how ginny did that in the books, when Hermione said it to fred and george, and i found it v. entertainin and cool. thanx!! |
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| Reviewer: Nigella | Date: 2004-06-15 |
| Reviewid: 87206 | Chapter: 1 |
That was lovely - I enjoyed it very much! A real taste of things to come ...
I loved: how you managed to make poor Ron sound so upset; the lock-picking; Arthur being so perceptive and reasonable; Percy apparently being a bit out on a limb even then ... all kinds of things! Oh, and Molly having realised what the twins had bought and instantly acquiring an eraser - priceless! And, of course, the twins ...
One small point to watch, if you'll forgive me - a couple of times you had 'you're' when it should have been 'your'.
Keep writing - I'm looking forward to more! |
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| Reviewer: H/G...R/H...Loveable,Likeable,Liveable...Fluff Lov | Date: 2004-06-14 |
| Reviewid: 87102 | Chapter: 1 |
dear other girl,
great story. i luv how all the characters are just how they're supposed 2 be.
Favorite Part:
"Quafflemuffins, you guys, if you’re not going to let me ride you could at least leave me alone," she yelled.
"Yeesh, someone’s in a bad mood," commented George, while Fred simply said, "Quafflemuffins?"
well thats all for now. great story.
~H/G...R/H...Loveable,Likeable,Liveable...Fluff Lover |
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| Reviewer: ParvatiGurl | Date: 2004-06-13 |
| Reviewid: 86947 | Chapter: 1 |
Dear Other Girl,
i really liked your story. it shows ginny as a mini fred and gorge. she is sort of like the little tag along, and she wants to do everything her brothers can do.
-ParvatiGurl |
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| Reviewer: hermionegranger909 | Date: 2004-06-12 |
| Reviewid: 86819 | Chapter: 1 |
| cute. I like the idea that Fred and George learned lock picking from Ginny.Heeeheee |
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| Reviewer: hairy_hen | Date: 2004-06-12 |
| Reviewid: 86816 | Chapter: 1 |
| Magnificent. You've crafted a great story for Ginny's first flight, with all the Weasleys in character, for their ages. I really like how we can see traces of Ginny in OotP, even at age six--lying to her mother with ease, aiding Fred and George in mischief, loving flying. I really enjoyed reading this. |
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