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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 18

Reviewer: Reader2Date: 2005-03-16
Reviewid: 116714Chapter: 1
A very good little fic

Reviewer: AngharadDate: 2004-08-22
Reviewid: 98257Chapter: 1
That was brilliant! And yes, it was from the Dick Van Dyke show, the very best episode ever, My mom watches the show and so I do too. Laura gets her toe stuck and the hotel workers think Rob is a loony because he gives himself a fake mustache in an attempt to look gallant or something...Well done!

Reviewer: roadrnrDate: 2004-08-05
Reviewid: 95883Chapter: 1
Thanks for fortuitously posting your review to Alchemilla's story. It gave me the opportunity to read this latest R/H story and I like it! The scene in the bath where Ron discovers Hermione is a great image (She stuck in the bath and he gingerly sitting on the vanity stool, ignoring the danger of hypothermia)-- do you illustrate your work? And thanks for the vintage sitcom reference. I can just imagine Hermione channeling MTM: "Oh, Ron!"

Reviewer: *LuNa*Date: 2004-07-22
Reviewid: 93681Chapter: 1
Wonderful and Sweet!

Reviewer: yogaDate: 2004-07-20
Reviewid: 93212Chapter: 1
awwwww, how cute :)

Reviewer: FelicityDate: 2004-06-21
Reviewid: 88045Chapter: 1
This story was so cute! It was in true R/H fashion. Keep up the great writing and story-telling!

Reviewer: KiyofoxDate: 2004-06-19
Reviewid: 87810Chapter: 1
This is my kind of story, with the creative predicament and the happy ending.
Fantastic job. I think you have a real knack for putting Hermione and Ron together, keep it up!

Reviewer: madame enDate: 2004-06-18
Reviewid: 87798Chapter: 1
awww...very sweet. I like the fact that Ron can't resist teasing her. Nice to see a lighthearted fic for a change. :o)

Reviewer: AzyneDate: 2004-06-16
Reviewid: 87307Chapter: 1
Hah! Loved it. The last line was a bit cheesey though, but aren't we all suckers to the cheese...

*Ignore my weirdness and appreciate my review*

Reviewer: St. MargaretsDate: 2004-06-15
Reviewid: 87285Chapter: 1
I remember that episode! (betcha I'm older than you!) This was sweet and such an unromantic way to propose that would bring smiles to their faces in the years to come. I really enjoyed this bit o' fluff.

Reviewer: ???Date: 2004-06-15
Reviewid: 87275Chapter: 1

Reviewer: LinnetDate: 2004-06-15
Reviewid: 87191Chapter: 1
This is adorable! Very cute idea.


Reviewer: Frankie BeeblebroxDate: 2004-06-14
Reviewid: 87067Chapter: 1
Very sweet, and very well done.

Odd. . . I think I remember that episode as well. . .great rendition of it!

Reviewer: miaka mouseDate: 2004-06-14
Reviewid: 87035Chapter: 1
but of course! has no one watched 'the seven year itch' with marilyn monroe? she's the one who gets her toe stuck, but the guy who helps her pull it out is a married man trying very hard not to cheat... :- fun movie IMHO... anyway great fic! i luv the fluff...

Reviewer: dzennkaDate: 2004-06-14
Reviewid: 87019Chapter: 1
I think the basic idea of a toe caught in a tap was in a Sweet Valley High book, although I doubt that was where the idea originated.

Reviewer: Jose ArbeladaDate: 2004-06-14
Reviewid: 87014Chapter: 1
You need to run this through a good spell checker. It is amost unreadable as it stands. the initial joke is funny if you can get that far, It stopped because it is to hard to translate what youv'e written into English.

Reviewer: ShinaLarisDate: 2004-06-13
Reviewid: 86994Chapter: 1
That was cute. =) However, I think the things Hermione said were a bit OC. It just seems a bit strange to have her cursing. But I really enjoyed it. One of the best situations I've read. ;)

~Shina Laris

Reviewer: SarahDate: 2004-06-13
Reviewid: 86991Chapter: 1
CUTE! This is cute! Poor Hermione! I would love to see what Ron will say to Harry and his family when they pop over to the restaurant...

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