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Review(s): 15
| Reviewer: Sue | Date: 2004-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 106721 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very good story! It makes me admire Neville even more. He's such an unsung hero. But sometimes heroes are like that. Good job of giving me a peek into what it must be like for him, and giving him a dignity I don't usually apply to him. |
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| Reviewer: buri | Date: 2004-07-02 |
| Reviewid: 90106 | Chapter: 1 |
| omg lio! i loved your story! good food, or as leaf would say, funfunfunfunfunfunfunfun! i love you dood! ttyl bye! |
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| Reviewer: H/G...R/H...Loveable,Likeable,Liveable...Fluff Lov | Date: 2004-06-30 |
| Reviewid: 89612 | Chapter: 1 |
Purple Eyed Weasley,
Hi, great story! I love how you catch Neville's perspective perfectly. Awesome story again.
~-~-H\G...R\H...Loveable, Likeable...Fluff Lover~-~- |
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| Reviewer: Trista | Date: 2004-06-28 |
| Reviewid: 89266 | Chapter: 1 |
| *sobs* That was so sweet. Poor Neville, having to live with that...that...HAG. Keep up the good work. |
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| Reviewer: Pavati gurl | Date: 2004-06-28 |
| Reviewid: 89218 | Chapter: 1 |
| it almost mad me cry. poor neville!! You did an awsome job!! You made me want to write for sugar quill. purple eyed wesely -- i hope you write more stories, i would love to read them!! |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2004-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 89084 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was a lovely story. You really made my heart ache for poor Neville. I especially loved the part where his mum gave him a hug- very poewrful poignant moment. Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: heartsea | Date: 2004-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 89080 | Chapter: 1 |
| this has been a wonderful and simple story; i absolutely loved the part about the lilies. do keep up the good work. |
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| Reviewer: Jenny | Date: 2004-06-26 |
| Reviewid: 88994 | Chapter: 1 |
Poor Neville...
Your story was very good. I really like the way you portrayed Neville, he was very realistic.
Very sad. |
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| Reviewer: Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy | Date: 2004-06-25 |
| Reviewid: 88880 | Chapter: 1 |
| beautiful and tragic...well done. Poor Neville. I really like him, he has great potential. |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88664 | Chapter: 1 |
| Congrats, and welcome to the Quill! What an amazing start you have made. Neville has always been a wonderfully tragic hero, and you have done a great job with this story. You're depictions of the daymare's are particularly moving, and I loved the touch with the lillies. absolutely brilliant and very Neville. |
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| Reviewer: Author By Night | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88497 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww.... that was so sweet! Poor Neville. Just one little tip- next time, try double spacing or reformatting, so that there's more space between paragraphs. |
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