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Review(s): 23
| Reviewer: Jo Wickaninnish | Date: 2004-07-28 |
| Reviewid: 94285 | Chapter: 1 |
| What an intruiging snippet. I felt so bad for poor Harry (and I liked the use of the lines from LotR- another timeless classic- they were very appropriate). The end seemed a little strange, claiming that he was alone, but he'd never be alone, but it was still a very good fic. I enjoyed it. |
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| Reviewer: katie | Date: 2004-07-07 |
| Reviewid: 91160 | Chapter: 1 |
cool i like it.It really shows all of the emotion building up inside him,along with great writing!keep up the good work!
~katie |
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| Reviewer: Kathryn | Date: 2004-07-07 |
| Reviewid: 91118 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow... that was sad.. i thought i was gonna cry but then it finnshied.. i would lov to here more... plz... |
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| Reviewer: majiklmoon | Date: 2004-06-30 |
| Reviewid: 89560 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, that was really powerful. Please don't tell me it's a one part one shot deal, because I would love to see it continue. You are a very good writer, and I would love to see you explore in depth the link between Harry and Dumbledore. I love the idea that he as devices that he uses to keep track of Harry. Again, great job and keep it up. |
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| Reviewer: Mihal Skaggs | Date: 2004-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 89130 | Chapter: 1 |
I have to tell you that your story brought tears to my eyes. The feelings that I felt when Sirius was killed int he last book came flooding back to me. I have to say that I couldn't help feeling at the time, as well as when reading your story, that it was unfair that Harry was going to go forward without his God Father.
Great Work! |
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| Reviewer: Her-Me-Oh-Ninny | Date: 2004-06-25 |
| Reviewid: 88822 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very um, Lord Of the Ringish.To be marked as the Dark Lord's equalis to be alone. In Lord of the Rings, To carry a ring of power is to be alone. And willl you look into the mirror? What will I see? Even the wisest cannot tell,for the mirror shows many things. That is a direct quote from Lord of the Ring the Fellowship of the Ring. Anyway I was a good story and I enjoyed reading it. Harry Potter mets Lord of the Rings, interesting . |
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| Reviewer: keighla | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88616 | Chapter: 1 |
hi sarah,
This is really sad but i love it it is really good!
i hope u write more!
your bff |
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| Reviewer: St. Margarets | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88605 | Chapter: 1 |
Your first story at the Quill! This was so sad--you really did a great job with tone. I liked your numerous references to canon--esp. Phineas who is a personal fav. of mine.
And no--you don't have to write just R/H stories. Think how boring it would be if we all wrote the same things. Keep writing. |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88604 | Chapter: 1 |
"Harry tried to stop them but they came pouring out of his soul."
Beautiful. This whole sequence of healing for Harry was amazingly personal and heart-wrenching to read. Very well done. |
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| Reviewer: Caitlin | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88571 | Chapter: 1 |
This was really good. I like the emotion in this, and the switching between the two PoV's. Is there going to be another chapter to this? It's ended wonderfully here, but I would like to see some more. Anyway, brilliant job!
~Caitlin |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88564 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a great little story! The Room of Requirement sure comes in handy and now that authors know about it, it must be granting requests right and left! You've done a nice job here: I can feel Harry's pain and also Dumbledore's apprehension. Your ending is full of hope though and that's just what Harry needs, even if he doesn't know it yet. |
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| Reviewer: Noel | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88549 | Chapter: 1 |
| Urm...thiz iz ok but i thought everything here wuz supoesed 2 b about Hermione and Ron. SO pleaz next time u write like make it about them! ;) thnx! |
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| Reviewer: Lawesa | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88509 | Chapter: 1 |
| Who cool, I'm the first response! Enyway, Your story I think brought something we all want to see again. Sirius, and or HARRY seeing Sirius. I loved how harry ended up crying in the end (He really needed to) I also liked how you put Sirius in his dog form. Write More! |
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