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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Astrid | Date: 2004-08-06 |
| Reviewid: 96118 | Chapter: 1 |
| Well-written. The emotions Harry feels are very realistic and I like how he's happy fleetingly but then loses it. Also Ginny is just the right person to get him out of his brooding. Excellent job! |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-07-13 |
| Reviewid: 92158 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wonderful story! You have conveyed Harry's emotional turmoil beautifully here, as well as the frustration of those who care the most about him. The confrontation with Ginny was nicely done and amazingly in character for both parties. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2004-07-13 |
| Reviewid: 92070 | Chapter: 1 |
Go, Ginny, go! I can just see her telling Harry to start living again the way she did in this story. Your characterization of her is spot-on.
There are lots of stories being written with Ginny helping to draw-out Harry and I'd say this one ranks with some of the better ones. You've done a really nice job with all the characters, not just Ginny, even though it's a short story. I really enjoyed this one. |
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| Reviewer: hairy_hen | Date: 2004-07-13 |
| Reviewid: 92065 | Chapter: 1 |
| Good portrayal of how upset Harry is at Sirius' death, and how he can't deal with people. Also cool how Ginny helps him get past it enough to enjoy the party, just a bit. |
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