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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-03-09
Reviewid: 115955Chapter: 1
disturbing

Reviewer: Pineapple QueenDate: 2004-07-16
Reviewid: 92561Chapter: 1
Nice! Your characterizations of Peter and Lily were very good. This is a scene I could definitely imagine happening. Great job!

-PQ

Reviewer: maidenjediDate: 2004-07-15
Reviewid: 92394Chapter: 1
Author by Night - I've gone by "texgoddess" in a fandom or two, but I've never been to ecfans.com. Glad you liked this story, and thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: ZaraDate: 2004-07-14
Reviewid: 92319Chapter: 1
wow...

Reviewer: Author by NightDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92211Chapter: 1
thethiefofalways - If you were so bored, you should have pressed the back button. Believe me, that would've been nicer than leaving an insulting review.

Reviewer: Author by NightDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92208Chapter: 1
Sorry, but is this *Txangoddess*? From ecfans.com?

Anyway, I really liked this fanfic... Peter isn't really to be felt sorry for, and yet, he sort of is. It's obvious he is very confused.

Reviewer: Frankie BeeblebroxDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92179Chapter: 1
Wow. This is superb. You have shown a warmth and humanity to Peter that very few people recognize, fewer still portray, and yet made it utterly believable that he will betray those he loves best. Between his sorrow, his humor, his absolute human frailty. . . this man I can picture James and Lily trusting with their lives. The idea that he knows what he has become and yet sees no way to change his destiny, even faced with those he loves most in the world is much more real to me than many fics I have before. Wonderful, wonderful work!

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