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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Christina | Date: 2004-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 95225 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story was really cute and sweet...it's kinda how i think of james potter and how he acted in hogwarts!!! nice story! please keep writing! thanks! |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 93330 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very sweet. I like the interaction between James and Lily, and I like how you have brought them together here. It's and interesting twist to have them be friends, then grow apart, and then become friends again, but it definitely makes sense. Wonder why Voldemort chose Little Whinging in particular? Hmmmmm. . . Nicely done! |
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| Reviewer: Sailoranime | Date: 2004-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 93259 | Chapter: 1 |
"Now, after so many BOOMs you'd think James would get the picture that no, I do not want to date you and yes, I do want to hex you."
Oh, I love that line. Very cute story, I was surprised the by Voldemort attack. Not too fluffy, but definitely shippy. ^_^ |
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| Reviewer: Pineapple Queen | Date: 2004-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 93244 | Chapter: 1 |
Cute! It's always good to find a good L/J one shot. I haven't read your fic on ff.n, but I'll definitely have to check it out.
-PQ |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2004-07-18 |
| Reviewid: 93005 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awww. Sweet. A nice interpretation of James, and how his ego- problem started. And the idea of Lily knowing him as quite a nice guy before is a good one- you can see how his personality change would upset her. And the idea of the recurring problem of how he treated Snape. I liked how you brought Petunia in too. Keep writitng! |
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| Reviewer: Gypsy Girl | Date: 2004-07-17 |
| Reviewid: 92832 | Chapter: 1 |
yay! first review!
i enjoyed this story very much... just like lily to worry about the sister that dislikes her so much. the ending line was cute as well! keep writing! |
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