Oh! I've seen very few first-moon fics, so snaps for originality! This was heartbreaking. If I had to throw any suggestions or comments to you, I'd wonder about the timeframe--I suppose it's possible that Remus could've been in St. Mungo's for a whole month after his bite, but it seems a bit long. However, it's not an error--just something that struck my attention. Lovely story altogether!
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