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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Black Irony
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: AristotleDate: 2004-08-19
Reviewid: 97882Chapter: 1
Great ending! Oh, and great fic while we're at it. Once again, you have brilliantly captured the characters to their true form. I especially liked Peter, who most depcit to be a moronic twit with no mind of his own. Seeing him portrayed as a real human being is quite refreshing. Great work, and I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mellafeDate: 2004-08-09
Reviewid: 96532Chapter: 1
Remus seemed too insecure to me. I mean, it's well written (your story) but somehow it felt strange... distant. I still enjoyed it though.

Reviewer: Eliza M.Date: 2004-07-28
Reviewid: 94289Chapter: 1
You made me cry, you made me laugh and I find the last line heartbreaking. Great story.

Reviewer: onlylonelyDate: 2004-07-27
Reviewid: 94105Chapter: 1
Huh... Can you believe this is the first R/S I've ever read? It's actually pretty good. I love Remus' lines, they just made me want to hug him. I can understand having a mother working three jobs, and I can understand why he thought Sirius was using him to revenge his family.

Although... I'm not used to seeing boys cry. *shifts uncomfortably*

Reviewer: Author by NightDate: 2004-07-23
Reviewid: 93754Chapter: 1
Wow, very good fanfic! I think Remus would be a bit more confident than that, but it was still well-written. But how does James figure Peter walked in on them doing something, if they were both dressed and standing?

Also, I would perhaps put a warning on your fic, just saying that it is a male/male relationship, because there is a chance a younger reader, or a reader who just doesn't know what slash is, could stumble upon this, and I know it sounds silly, but readers should be told.

Reviewer: amandaDate: 2004-07-22
Reviewid: 93511Chapter: 1
Oh that was so cute, please write more, heaps and heaps more!!

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