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Review(s): 9
| Reviewer: Miss Gypsy | Date: 2004-12-29 |
| Reviewid: 109017 | Chapter: 1 |
| Adorable. I opened this song on the internet and listened to it while I read this. Very enjoyable, bring on the fluff! |
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| Reviewer: Bianca | Date: 2004-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 97165 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is by far the best story I have read on The Sugar Quill!! I hope you make a second!! |
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| Reviewer: catakit | Date: 2004-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 97163 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm sorry, but that was sicky sweet, like fructose overdone, and cotton candy that's been mashed flat and dipped in corn syrup. BAD, Horribly BAD. Gracious, what drivel. If you're writing from real life, I pitty your romance, if you aren't, please rest assured that love is better than that! |
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| Reviewer: sweetie | Date: 2004-08-03 |
| Reviewid: 95549 | Chapter: 1 |
oooh, that was TOO SWEET! the ultimate in R/Hness! beautiful job! the whole time i read Hermione's letter, i was thinking "this must be crushing poor Ron." AWWWW! a very unique turn on their "confessing of feelings." great job!
R/H forever!
luv sweetie |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 95288 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awwww. . . very sweet. I like how you portrayed Hermione and Ron's nervousness about taking that next step, especially the line about suddenly finding the pleats in her skirt fascinating. That was brilliant. I found the changing perspective to be a bit odd in the middle of the story when Hermione started adding her own internal monologue to the story, but once I caught on it made a lot more sense. All in all, this was quite lovely. |
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