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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: If Only
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-02-13
Reviewid: 139762Chapter: 1
Nice

Reviewer: ivy & GracieDate: 2004-11-26
Reviewid: 106079Chapter: 1
What a great illustration of what happens when we pursue what makes us FEEL important, rather than what IS important. Well done!

Reviewer: Jo WickaninnishDate: 2004-08-21
Reviewid: 98172Chapter: 1
Oh my goodness, that's so sad.

It's a nice little one shot. I wish there had been more to it. It would've been nice if perhaps there was a chapter on each of those doors. The door detailing his final discussion with his parents. The door closing his relationship with Penelope. Maybe even a door having him meet up with Dumbledore and choose to have nothing to do with the Order.

But it's a phenomenal start. Or, well... finish as well, as it doesn't seem like you plan to continue.

Reviewer: jameyz aka ravenlyDate: 2004-08-18
Reviewid: 97766Chapter: 1
I like this. Is this the beginning to a bigger story? It seems so short and incomplete to stand alone. There are so many ways you could explore this. If it is, it's a good beginning and I'm ready to read the rest.

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