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Review(s): 4
| Reviewer: ivy & Gracie | Date: 2004-11-26 |
| Reviewid: 106079 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a great illustration of what happens when we pursue what makes us FEEL important, rather than what IS important. Well done! |
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| Reviewer: Jo Wickaninnish | Date: 2004-08-21 |
| Reviewid: 98172 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh my goodness, that's so sad.
It's a nice little one shot. I wish there had been more to it. It would've been nice if perhaps there was a chapter on each of those doors. The door detailing his final discussion with his parents. The door closing his relationship with Penelope. Maybe even a door having him meet up with Dumbledore and choose to have nothing to do with the Order.
But it's a phenomenal start. Or, well... finish as well, as it doesn't seem like you plan to continue. |
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| Reviewer: jameyz aka ravenly | Date: 2004-08-18 |
| Reviewid: 97766 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like this. Is this the beginning to a bigger story? It seems so short and incomplete to stand alone. There are so many ways you could explore this. If it is, it's a good beginning and I'm ready to read the rest. |
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