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Review(s): 12
| Reviewer: Brittney | Date: 2004-10-24 |
| Reviewid: 102315 | Chapter: 1 |
Lovely, PQ! I'm a big fan of baby Harry, and this was so perfect. It was sweet and romantic, even though I had this sober feeling hanging around that made me want to cry. I know HP is fictional and everything, but it's the lovely L/J fics like this that make me reallyreallyreally mad at Voldemort. Bah. Thank you for a wonderful read!
~Brittney |
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| Reviewer: kels | Date: 2004-10-03 |
| Reviewid: 100293 | Chapter: 1 |
*tears*
I loved it. It was so well written and explained James and Lily perfectly. I hope to read more of your work sometime. :) |
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| Reviewer: St. Margarets | Date: 2004-09-26 |
| Reviewid: 99447 | Chapter: 1 |
| You have always reviewed me, so I thought I'd check out some of your work. This a lovely one shot. I really like the simple language of the fairytale. It makes the events of the L/J's school years all the more poignant, because you're not trying to psychoanalyze - just telling the bare facts. And the bare facts of falling in love and doing everything to protect a beloved child are really quite moving . . . Wonderful! |
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| Reviewer: Pineapple Queen | Date: 2004-09-26 |
| Reviewid: 99417 | Chapter: 1 |
Thank you SO much for all of the reviews. You all made my day. =)
Author by Night: First reviewer, thanks! I thought of putting more action in there, but then decided that I couldn't really think of any action to put! I doubt James would have gone into either his more intimate moments with Lily or a battle scene when he was trying to get Harry to sleep...
Pippin: Thank you! I do hope to keep writing. =)
sruti: Simple and sweet was what I was going for, so I'm glad to hear that you think so!
Genesse: Aw, thanks. I rather liked that line, too. I also like OccasionallyCheeky!James. He's so much fun. :-)
None ya beeswax: yay, I was aiming for it to sound like a fairytale or bedtime story.
kayjal: I'm glad you think that the explanation is plausible! I've always thought that it was the most plausible from all the ones I've seen, so...
koonelli: Aw, thanks! "one of those tiny fabric roses you get on straw hats in summer"--that might be one of the nicest things anyone's said about my fanfiction! Thanks again! |
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| Reviewer: koonelli | Date: 2004-09-25 |
| Reviewid: 99387 | Chapter: 1 |
That was a very pretty little story. It was like one of those tiny fabric roses you get on straw hats in summer. I loved it!
The only problem was that there wasn't enough of it. I would have liked to have heard more about some of the things you described, I want more of the pretty little story!
Other than that, I think it was a top rate fic. Nice one! |
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| Reviewer: kayjal | Date: 2004-09-25 |
| Reviewid: 99342 | Chapter: 1 |
| i liked it. the flow, the writing style the simplicity and the PLAUSIBLE explanation that u gave for their finally getting together. it was a very very nice story. |
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| Reviewer: None ya beeswax | Date: 2004-09-25 |
| Reviewid: 99318 | Chapter: 1 |
| ohh that was so cute!! it sounds just like what you would tell a baby to make it go to sleep! |
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| Reviewer: Genesse | Date: 2004-09-24 |
| Reviewid: 99256 | Chapter: 1 |
That was beautiful. I'm blinking back the tears.
"Nearly all the other girls in the school would have jumped at such a chance, as the boy was very handsome and charismatic. But still, she said no."
I really liked that part. I know that James was supposed to have matured and all, but I like to think that he was still cheeky every once in a while. |
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| Reviewer: Pippin | Date: 2004-09-24 |
| Reviewid: 99160 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was lovely. Just right. A less-than-one-year-old doesn't need gory details. Keep writing. |
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| Reviewer: Author by Night | Date: 2004-09-24 |
| Reviewid: 99135 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, this was really cute! But although I know this was supposed to be written in simple terms because it was a kids story, I think there could have been more action. |
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