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Review(s): 4
| Reviewer: Gufa | Date: 2004-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 99702 | Chapter: 1 |
Hm. I reviewed this the other day, but my review seems to have disappeared...sorry about that!
Anyway, what I like most about this story is the way you handle your descriptions. They are very vivid, and I can really see what you're writing about.
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| Reviewer: Lady Narcissa | Date: 2004-09-25 |
| Reviewid: 99335 | Chapter: 1 |
| "The only thing that kept him from doing so was the thin cracked wall of the knowledge that he was innocent." -- what an excellent line. This is a very descriptive piece. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
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| Reviewer: Ozma | Date: 2004-09-24 |
| Reviewid: 99228 | Chapter: 1 |
This was a chilling look into Sirius's Azkaban state of mind. His despair and guilt were palpable. I especially liked the description of Fudge's reaction to the dementor as seen through Sirius's eyes.
Sirius's first sight of Harry in the alley was also described very movingly. |
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