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| Reviewer: Tom | Date: 2004-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 99752 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very well written. If Harry Potter was told from anyone else's point of view except for Harry then that would be a good chapter. It all makes sense and it stays with the story and its not going off like a Harry and Hermione relationship. Good job! I would rank it 9.7 out of 10 |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 99725 | Chapter: 1 |
| Interesting concept, and very well executed! Few people would think of Bellatrix having doubts about her place amongst Voldemort's ranks, but you have not only shown the possibility of her self doubt, but you've made it plausible as well. Nice desription of how days pass in Azkaban, and I like the imagery of the picture being balances on the blade as well. Very well done! |
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| Reviewer: Annie | Date: 2004-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 99701 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ginnyyyyy!! You wrote another fic! And a cool, nuancy one! Excitement. I really liked your descriptive language here, it really fit Bellatrix's character and the mood perfectly. Interesting character study. I can't really buy the fact the Bellatrix would ever have traitorous thoughts like this, there was just something too convincing in her obsessive loyalty to Voldemort, but still it was really interesting. I think you could have fleshed out the fic more, drawn it out a little more so it really has a climax and turning point when she finally decides to stay with Voldie. But anyways, it was great to see your name up there. PM me, its been forever! |
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| Reviewer: Pineapple Queen | Date: 2004-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 99660 | Chapter: 1 |
Nice work. Bella's thoughts are very real, and this is a well-written piece.
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