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Review(s): 15
| Reviewer: MrRobertsIII | Date: 2005-02-11 |
| Reviewid: 113520 | Chapter: 1 |
| You do good work in very little space. I'm off to read more of your work, hoping to find something a bit longer but just as excellent. |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2005-02-03 |
| Reviewid: 112868 | Chapter: 1 |
<Her housemates prodded and pushed, queried and complained. Eloise kept her mouth firmly shut, and refused to give in to any wheedling at all. >
Aww bless her. I hope her acne does clear up I know how horrible *that* can be. This was nicely written, gave a real insight into poor Eloise's feelings- keep writing. |
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| Reviewer: grass | Date: 2005-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 112631 | Chapter: 1 |
| awww. that's so cute. poor Marietta (sorta), I guess she deserved it. I like the perspective you took with Eloise. |
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| Reviewer: Miche | Date: 2004-11-24 |
| Reviewid: 105839 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love this story because I can certain sympathize with Eloise (don't all girls feel ugly to some extent) and because of how Eloise handled Marietta's. . . disfigurement. |
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| Reviewer: Hannah | Date: 2004-10-06 |
| Reviewid: 100484 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've been thinking of writing an Eloise story ever since I read the part in the fourth book with her being called a troll by Ron, but you beat me to it. Great job. |
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| Reviewer: Jen | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100470 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, this is a really great story! If you changed it a little (not really a HP one) it could be a Chicken Soup story! Great writing, hope to see more stories by you! |
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| Reviewer: Pineapple Queen | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100468 | Chapter: 1 |
Loved it! What an original story! Nice to see something from Eloise's point of view...great job!
-Pineapple Queen |
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| Reviewer: Pooca | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100466 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very, very cute. Quite creative, taking Eloise's POV... I always thought of her as older than the trio, but I suppose she could not be also. Huh. Intruiging, well done. :o) |
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| Reviewer: BlueMoon1242 | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100461 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was just wonderful! A little touch of humor, a dash of empathy, a truly realistic Eloise, and you have a beautiful fic. *grins* And I have to admit that the twist on Umbridge's name is pretty darn funny. |
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| Reviewer: Fireflash | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100458 | Chapter: 1 |
| Such a lovely little ficlet! It is true that we sympathise (or perhaps empathise is a better word) much better when we too have gone through tough times. Thanks for being so understanding of these and showing it so well through one of our least-known characters! |
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| Reviewer: Berte | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100444 | Chapter: 1 |
| Qute fic! Yes, it's all a matter of perspective. As long as someone has it worse than yourself, you'll survive, won't you? I liked that she didn't go into any details, and just said it was 'bad', only used the knowledge for herself and her own surviving-through-the-zits. Nice! |
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| Reviewer: sruti | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100434 | Chapter: 1 |
| excellent-thanks for such anice fic-but pls oh pls can u finish scars of the heart??????? |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100426 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great idea! I would have never thought to use this approach. And I like the personality you've given Eloise, too! You had her describe herself as nice, and then she was. Nicely done! |
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| Reviewer: Miriam | Date: 2004-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 100421 | Chapter: 1 |
It is, indeed, a matter of perspective. I'm glad that you made Eloise keep her silence. This was a very thoughtful one-shot.
-----Miriam |
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